by
tehuti88
on Aug 18, 2017
Gay Male
WHAT I'M *NOT* LOOKING FOR IN COMMENTS/REVIEWS:
*Critique/criticism of my writing style-I'm comfortable with my style (wordiness and all), so if you find it not to your liking, you're welome to try out something else.
*Publication advice-I'm not trying to get published, so advice on how to make a piece publication worthy is not necessary.
*Sarcasm or rude...
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by
MilkChocolateAmazon
on Sep 13, 2017
Gay Male
This is my first submission so constructive criticism is welcome. Feel free to tell me whether to continue or not. I don't want to continue with a story people are not enjoying. Thanks.
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"Does anyone know why Romeo would kill himself just because he thought Juliet dead?" my professor asked looking around the class speculatively. She looks at me expectantl...
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by
MilkChocolateAmazon
on Aug 31, 2017
Gay Male
Due to the numerous emails I have received in regards to continuing this story, I thought it best to do another one so here it is. I hope you like it and thank you again to everyone for their kind words of encouragement.
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"What a wonderful world..." He sings happily.
I pounce on him as he enters the room, making him drop his bags whilst I devour his pre...
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by
MilkChocolateAmazon
on Aug 31, 2017
Gay Male
Thank you everybody, once again for the feedback. Sorry this chapter has taken so long to be forthcoming but University is not as easy going as I'd expected. Deadlines, deadlines, deadlines! Anyways, here's the next chapter. Enjoy.
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"Alex! Car! Stop goddamit! Stop!"
Too late.
The sickening crunch, the pool of blood, the crumpled form, those pleading...
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by
MilkChocolateAmazon
on Aug 31, 2017
Gay Male
Thank you everybody for your comments on the first chapter. They were very encouraging. Here's Chapter 2, hopefully you won't be disappointed.
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So after the whole 'kiss' episode I did the mature thing and instead of confronting my feelings I made it my mission to avoid Alex at all costs. I was the last one in and the first one out of class and I made sure...
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Gay Male
Hey, sorry this chapter has taken so long. Life inevitably got in the way of this one, I'm afraid. I do hope you enjoy it though and it's what you've hoped for.
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"Oh God...Ares...we should stop..."
"We should but we won't."
I've got him pinned against the mirror, arms around my shoulders, legs wrapped around my waist; face a myriad of unspent ecs...
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Gay Male
I'm still contemplating the vision of beauty that crossed my path the next day; remembering the fiery red of his hair; cut short but with enough there to allow someone's fingers to run through. I'm also remembering the stormy grey of his eyes, the ampleness of his ruby lips and the slight curve of his back, sloping down into something altogether more satisfy...
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by
MilkChocolateAmazon
on Sep 13, 2017
Gay Male
"Break it up you two! Don't make me say it again!"
Damn it! I was just about to knock his fucking teeth out! Stupid fucking cunt! I'm seething, teeth bared, fists ready.
"He started-" I began.
"Save it. Both of you clean up and report to my office immediately!"
The tone of his voice leaves no room for argument so I pick myself up, glaring dangerously at...
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by
Milkyway
on Aug 18, 2017
Gay Male
This is my first man-on-man story. It's based on an experience I had which sadly didn't reach the stages that I've described here but I often wish it had.
I had my six-monthly medical examination as required by my work coming up and was off to see Doctor Elsworth again. He was a slightly eccentric and very well-spoken old-school type of English gentleman...
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by
milkweed
on Aug 18, 2017
Gay Male
Justin and I watched gay porn in his room at the seminary with the sound off. He had a 'sleep machine' that played a mix of ocean and woodland sounds that he would turn up while we watched guys, she-males, and some folk we weren't sure what to call go at it. "If anyone stops by, they'll think it's a boring nature show," he said.
And in a way, it was a natu...
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