Comments, critiques and tips are welcome. Hello and welcome to the 11th chapter of this lovely story. Once more there has been a twist to this story. I don't why I love twists my stories but hope this is really interesting to you guys. Before I go into writing I'd like to tell you guys that there is a part where there is a long son. I would also like to tha...
Who knew taking your turn at washing the dishes could turn sexy? That's exactly how it started as Janet squirmed up close to me, wrapping her arms around me from behind and pressing her chest against my back. I might not have had hands on my back but I swore I could feel her stiff nipples poking me. "Hey baby?" she cooed, kissing the nape of my neck and se...
The road stretched on behind me, lost in the snowstorm, but I knew it was out there...a wailing beast, gargantuan and hungry, gnashing its way through the winter winds as its red-blue eyes flashed in the white, searching... A curt, heavy knock pulled me out of the dream, the same dream I'd been having for months. I opened my eyes to sunlit walls, cream and...
Comments, critiques and tips are definitely welcome. Before I go deep into this story I would like to tell you guys that this story will take a leap of three weeks. I will do a quick summary for you to understand what had happened in those weeks. I am sorry if this offends you but going easy would have definitely made the story longer. Besides, I think you...
"Is he dead? He looks dead." "No, I just checked, he's still alive." Avery felt something hard nudge his side, right in his ribs. He grimaced, and tried to force his eyes open but couldn't. His entire body was wracked with pain. He couldn't move. His head was aching with such piercing pain; it felt as though it had been split open. 'Maybe I'm dying.' He...
It was dawn on a summer day in a forest in Idaho when Paine spotted the body floating in the river. He had gone out hoping to catch some fish. He didn't need to live off the land, but he liked doing it whenever possible. It meant that he didn't need to go to civilization as often. He had arrived only minutes before and was busy attaching his lure when he sa...
Here we are again with chapter six of forever yours. I really hope you guys will give me a higher rating. I am an amateur but I know that I will become a pro with your help. I believe even amateurs need support. Thank you for your comments in chapter 5. I will do my best to improve. I am thanking you in advance and I hope you will have a wonderful time readi...
This is a new series that I have decided to work on and deliver to you guys. It's always nice to share my work with you guys and I know that I am developing my writing skills into something more incredible. I would love to thank all those who read and loved my former serial "Forever yours." I hope you'll also start this new journey with me and end it with me...
Time seems to go by so quickly. It was almost a year that I moved out of my mom and step-dad's house, but it seemed like just yesterday. After graduating from college, I returned home to the Detroit suburbs. I got a job fairly quickly as a computer tech. The company I worked for sold PCs and custom software to small and medium-sized businesses. I did diagno...
My best friend Adam's parents had gone to Atlanta for the weekend and we were watching a porno flick in their living room. We'd known each other since we were five and at twenty we were best friends, always in and out of each other's houses. Adam's brother David had married a few years earlier and now Adam was the only one left at home. His father owned a on...