by
Cruel2BKind
on Sep 25, 2017
Gay Male
*I'm back, Baby*
The boy woke up, as he always did, opening his eyes to see the protective circle, etched in deep blue lines on the ceiling above his bed.
His mother's hand was on his shoulder. The woman was tall, fierce in a way that many had a hard time describing. Her hair was fire-red. Her eyes had a ring of silver around the pupil, very close, very th...
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by
tehuti88
on Aug 18, 2017
Gay Male
WHAT I'M *NOT* LOOKING FOR IN COMMENTS/REVIEWS:
*Critique/criticism of my writing style-I'm comfortable with my style (wordiness and all), so if you find it not to your liking, you're welome to try out something else.
*Publication advice-I'm not trying to get published, so advice on how to make a piece publication worthy is not necessary.
*Sarcasm or rude...
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