Any constructive criticism is welcome. ***** August 1997 Lungs burning and legs pumping furiously Jordyn Jameson pushed her bike faster around the wide curve of sidewalk bordering the park. She could hear the boys behind her gaining, their shouts and threats drawing attention from parents watching their children on the climbing structures and swings. Gl...
This is intended to be another lesbian Romance. Not exactly sure where it's going from here though. I'm really working hard here to create a character that is reacting to a situation that she finds herself in. I really don't want her to come across as a total man-hating bitch, but not really sure that I succeeded. Please try to read it with the understanding...
All characters in sexual situations are eighteen years of age or older. Reader discretion is advised. This chapter's flashbacks contain scenes of bullying, and non-sexual violence. -=-=-=- Sam clicked her lighter to start the small fire pit in the backyard. She stared at the tiny flame; eyes unfocused. The same old memories replayed in her mind. "What th...
Saturday morning was when she did laundry, and Mary Stevenson should have been folding her husband's clothes. Instead she stood staring down from their bedroom at the goddess sunbathing by the pool. As soon as she had noticed Alexa lying there, she had haphazardly dumped the clean clothes onto the bed and positioned herself by the window, unable to tear her...
This is my first attempt at writing a story so i'm testing the water really. Feedback welcomed. Starts slowly, goes on a bit. Apparently I can't write and listen to music at the same time but I was obsessed with I Walk a Little Faster as performed by Blossom Dearie throughout the time I was writing this, hence the title. ***** Prologue - A Dividing Line...
* All characters are 18 or over. * This is a story of two bisexual girls but Literotica only has a Lesbian category. Sorry. * The story is fiction. All characters, places, events and information are completely fictitious. Any resemblance to persons living or dead is coincidental. * I welcome constructive criticism but flaming and insulting comments will be d...
Someone had commented that this was realistic. Could you please explain why you feel that way? You might be wondering why Ellaine and Ellie got switched. Remember, this was in Tuyet's POV earlier. Simply, Ellaine and Ellie are twins. Tuyet gets them mixed up. This is a good cover for I messed up, yes? Please keep on with the feedback. I like tips and sugge...
This is my first effort. Be gentle. Constructive feedback is always welcome. If you enjoy, I have many more threads to tease out with these characters. -- Sitting in the car, waiting for the ferry to arrive, Alex realized how excited she was. She'd been looking forward to this weekend for a long time. Brian's kids were finally back with their mother...
When Gina Met Tammy...Ch.12 On their last day in Texas, Tammy gets to see the origin of Gina's wealth. Then the long drive home begins. TAMMY: Butterfly kisses woke me up Friday morning. When my eyes opened, Gina was in front of my face, smiling. She kissed me and said, "Wakey-wakey, my love." I buried my face in the pillow and begged for 5 more minu...
"Thank you" doesn't seem enough to express my gratitude to InPennyInPound for all of her help with writing Meredith and Joanie's story, the next chapter in the saga that has made so many people giddy over girls kissing. I hope everyone else enjoys the journey as much as we have. SSW *** Everyone has an idea of their perfect partner. Generalities in some...