I am always looking to improve my writing and would appreciate feedback, especially from women. I'd like to know what you, the reader, found particularly arousing and what could be improved upon. Feel free to PM me. All of the characters in this story are 18 or older. * My mom and I used to live in a nice rural area neighborhood but there weren't too many...
It was too hot to climb. We had gotten up early in the morning, and done a couple routes. There were three of us: Steph, Anna, and Me. Climbing as a trio was a little slow, but it was a lot of fun; and it was doubly fun because it was just us girls. It was late morning, and the sun was beating down on the cliff. It must have already been up in the 90s, an...
I am not a very good writer and his is my first story, so I hope its really not too bad. Comments will be greatly appreciated. ---------------------------------------- I am nervous as hell. Moving from one thing to another all around my house. I don't know why I am so nervous; I have somewhat of a relationship with this girl... why am I freaking out? After...
I had always sworn that I would keep my virginity until I got married. Now if you knew me now, you would laugh at that comment, but back then I was in my mid teens, I tried hard to keep to that promise, and believe me it wasn't easy. I was tall, 5'9, dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, tanned and 36 DD. Everyone always assumed my breasts weren't natural because o...
"What movie would you like to watch?" Holly asked Heather. "I don't care, whatever you want is fine." Heather replied. Heather sat her drink down on the coffee table and made herself comfortable on the couch. Holly put in the movie then sat down beside her. It was a little chilly in Holly's apartment, so Heather took a blanket and threw it over both of thei...
I threw down my pencil in disgust as the words on the page danced in front of my eyes. I still had three days to finish a career-making report and I was totally sick of it. A glance out the window didn’t help. It was mid-morning on a warm sunny Spring day and the air sparkled over the canyons of Manhattan. I got up, stretched, and walked down the hall to th...
Karen struggles to awake from the deepest sleep of her life. Her head is in a cloud, worse than the worse hang over she has ever experienced. As consciousness slowly returns, memories of an erotic dream start to return to her befuddled mind, dreams of eating pussy. She tries to stand and that's when it hits her. Her arms and legs are tied to the posts of the...
Well, hell, I was feeling horny. So what was new? I just had to get out of the apartment, so I decided to slip down a few doors and see Pamela, a good friend and fellow apartment dweller. We had found a common bond as we were both divorcees in our early thirties with no thoughts of rushing into another marriage. She loved to talk about sex, so did I! She was...
Let me tell you about the best lover I've ever had. She's kind of chubby and not much to look at, but she knows exactly what it takes to make me come. When I'm not in the mood she leaves me alone, but when I'm hot and ready she goes right to work. We've been having a red-hot affair for years and years and I still love to see the horny little grin on her face...
Separated by some 3,000 miles, I wrote several stories for my girlfriend, hoping to keep us in touch and sexually connected. This and other stories are fiction based on her fantasies and written with her as the first person. I tried using details to evoke visions of what the characters would see, hear, feel, smell and taste—something I believe is missing fro...