Thank you so much for the comments! That was some legitimate criticism about my writing. I will do better in proofreading and editing. I'm a little worried about the overall structure and direction of the story though. I have an outline for the story, but I never put a lot of attention to what specific niche within erotic literature I was trying to fall. I j...
CHAPTER ELEVEN (Tuesday, 23rd April 2002) Heather woke disorientated. Eventually, once she'd convinced herself she wasn't drunk or still dreaming, she realized she was upside down in someone else's bed. Upside down with a pair of alien feet under her nose. The lights were off and dawn hadn't yet broken, so she went by touch and smell. Quickly deducing the...
It had been several weeks since Helen and Paris had eloped from Sparta and Helen escaped the hard hand and salacious ways of her husband Menelaus who had left her to go to a family funeral. Helen was renowned for her exquisite beauty and had been pursued by many suitors; however, her father had arranged a marriage between her and Menelaus because he was weal...
Chapter Eight: Lizzy, Debbie and Ann---becoming Slaves Seven days after visiting Lizzy and Lara's solo adventure, Mistress got her answers. Lizzy called Lara and, with Mistress listening in, she told Lara "I have thought about you and Mistress all week. I've wanted to be a Slave to a strong woman for a long time. I want to be her Slave, please ask her to...
Chapter 7 Robyn's Day It was a perfect day to be outdoors. The sky was an azure blue with patches of wind swept clouds. The sun was out and shining bright and warm only to be cooled by a gentle and refreshing breeze now and then. Family and friends had begun filling the bleachers as the final preparations were being made. Lisa and her fellow graduating cl...
© 2007 by Penelope Street Even looking back, I remember the exact moment I first laid eyes on Andrea Marshall. I'm certain my heart missed a beat. Or two. I guess I didn't know she was different at that moment, but I still felt it. "Mrs. Larson?" she queried, rising from behind her desk to reveal a form that, even in an A-line skirt and tweed jacket, was c...
To my small group of fans, I apologize and thank you for your patience in waiting for this installment. Robyn & Lisa Chapter 8.5 A Blissful Reunion "Okay. Okay. I missed you too." Lisa said patting Robyn over her smooth leather jacket. She felt her tight squeeze enjoying the feel of Robyn's joy in her arms. Lisa would have enjoyed it even more if their...
Chapter 5 Finals Week "I'm not blowing you off. It's the truth." Lisa said sitting at her dorm desk adjusting her reading glasses. "Well, then when?" Robyn said on the phone. "It'll be over soon." "It's been soon for over a month now! I thought we'd see each other more often after the other night. I know you liked it." Robyn said. "I did and I'm sorry,...
Note: This is a muiltipart story that focuses in the early part on character development, before it gets to the sexier parts. Bear with it, however, and I promise you will be rewarded in the end. ---------------------------------------------- Part 1 "Whumpf." "Whumpf." The sound of breaking glass was muffled by the heavy linen napkins wrapped around eac...
Robyn & Lisa: Chapter 8 "College Town" Robyn finished her last class for the day and walked back to her small office. She slumped into her chair breathing out a heavy sigh and wiped her brow with the towel around her neck. She leaned over her desk and reached for her phone and sighed again. There were no missed calls. Four days had passed since Robyn and...