This is the second chapter of the first story I have ever written and I would be extremely pleased to have feedback about this story. Reading the first part would be a help to you before reading the second chapter. I hope this chapter is not too long. Tell me what you liked or did not like. What I could do better. What my strengths or weaknesses are. What yo...
This is the first part of a new story featuring the characters Jessie and Lizzie which I am writing due to all the good feedback I got for the previous one "A High School Bet", so I would like to thank everybody who has been generous enough to give their comments and support, it means a lot to me. * Lizzie Nichols was on her hands and knees, a six inch coc...
-4- Dee finally had accepted my rationale of why I was driving, though she had asked me out. She wanted us to go to Milly's, a fern bar/café that catered to the lesbians of our fair city; it wasn't unique, there were several gay/lesbian-friendly places in our metro. Milly's was known far and wide for its calamari appetizers, so I was okay with going there...
When you're 18 years old, things you've done since you were 12 have lost their meaning. The routines tick along, safe and unexceptional, until you stop for a moment and ask yourself what's really happening. I don't remember what movie we were watching the night after my twelfth birthday, but I do remember the chill in the basement and the sharp scent of dog...
The first time I laid eyes on Alex McGuigan was in September 2010. We were moving in to our university halls of residence together. There were four of us moving into a flat, all with en-suite bedrooms to embark on our first year of undergraduate study. Moving-in day was awkward, with various sets of parents running to and fro up the stairs, down the stairs,...
"Alright, girls," Marcia, the head of Tri Delt, said to the group of young sorority hopefuls. It was the day after bid day and the excitement of being accepted into the sorority electrified the air. "Although we've given you each a bid, you're still not part of the organization. Before initiation, you have to survive the new member period." Laura- 18, long...
The old house was completely empty, aside from a vixen and her video camera. Waiting in the room that her best friend Gypsy shared with her boyfriend Dave, 21 year old Mandy looked like the porn star she had in her. Raven locks were tossed and teased. Make-up was thick and heavy. A black, see-through bra left nothing to the imagination. She sported a garter...
Jenna awoke the next morning, enveloped in warm, satin sheets, with some smallpatches of sunlight streaming across a fragrantly scented bedspread. She laythere unmoving on her side, and then remembered exactly how she had gotten inthis situation. Smiling, she felt an arm slowly graze her shoulder andpull hernto a warm embrace. It hadn't been a dream then, sh...
Andrea sat on the hotel bed, watching the fifth porn tape that the love hotel had to offer. She sat with nothing, but her bathrobes on. Her body was still wet from the steaming shower. Droplets of water glistened all over her half naked body, like small diamonds. The aroma of her shampoo was still strong in her long, lustrous brunette hair. It was often tied...
I was nervous. I was driving to my Father's house to meet my new Stepmother. I looked at the passenger seat and saw the cheap earning that I got her. I have never seen the chick but Father always talked highly of her. I sighed as I pulled to the house and saw everything normal. I walked up to the door and before I could knock the door swung open and there wa...