Seating in the back seat of the large white limo you look around. Your friends smile at you their Champagne glasses in hand.
To your right you have Mary. She works at a lingerie shop. As your maid of honor and probably best friend she has organized the little bachelorette party you’ve been enjoying a lot so far.
To your left you have Janet. Janet is a shy housewife; she's the oldest of your group. She actually used to babysit you when you were young but through a strange twist of fate she went from tucking you into bed to being one of your best friends.
In front of you, from right to left, you have, Susan, Ally and Bree, they all worked with you at the agency. Susan is a blonde, Ally is a brunette and Bree is a redhead, besides that there’s not much to differentiate them. They all have desk jobs pretty much like the one you had but unlike you they still have to find the perfect man to marry and quit their job.
The champagne has been flowing all evening at the fine dining restaurant and you’re starting to feel a bit tipsy. You don’t really care as this is your last night of freedom. This is your bachelorette party and you’re getting married tomorrow. The promised and lucky one is Jeremiah Junior Rockwell, Djadjay for short. He’s the son of the owner of the company where Susan, Ally, Bree and you used to work. Not the brightest of the bunch, but he’s nice on the eye and the portfolio of actions he owns should guarantee you not to have to sit at a desk for the rest of your life. He’s nice and caring too and he loves you with all his heart. Honestly, what else could a girl ask for?
Behind the darkly tinted windows, the lights of the city go by. Your destination, the Coffin club, is an exclusive nightclub that opened in the suburbs a few months ago. Like any other night clubber in the city you’ve tried everything to get in but its reputation of exclusivity is not over done. It’s literally impossible to get in.
Earlier that evening, when you started unwrapping your gifts you found the six black passes with the blood red C on it. You felt so exhilarated. This is the best present Mary could have given you. As the slogan of the club states: “Coffin Club, we’ll make your night last forever.” And what other night you’d want to last forever but you’re bachelorette party night.
The Limo stops in front of the Club. The building used to be a factory of some sort, a couple of powerful spotlights illuminate the large red C on the façade. At the entrance two massive bouncers block the way. A young couple dressed in black and white stands in line. One of the bouncers opens the red cord after checking their invitation. Except for Mary who doesn’t seem to care, you all shiver as the cold air of the evening hits your bare shoulders. You exit the car and followed by your court you get to the entrance.
“Good evening, Miss Mary,” says the bouncer opening the cord and stepping aside to let you enter, “So good to have you back.”
You shoot her a black look. She came here without you and she didn’t even tell you about it. Bitch!
“Oh darling, don’t look at me like that,” she says as if she was reading your mind, “I had to test it before I brought you all here. I promise you’re going to love the little party I’ve prepared for you.”
The bouncer’s smile is a bit gloomy but you soon forget it as the drumbeat of the dance floor reaches your ears. You follow her inside. You don’t know if it’s the light in the club but Mary suddenly seems much paler.
Two hostesses greet you at the entrance. They’re only wearing a thong and a bra and they’re both sporting the vampire costume trademark of the club. The lenses, pointy ears and fake fangs seem so real, they both look extremely hot.
“Oh Mary,” the first girl says through her fangs “So good to see you. So you brought your friends, they all look delicious. The mistress is finishing the set up in the back room. She wanted to see you.”
“Of course Missy,” she answers smiling “Susan, why don’t you come and give me a hand, meanwhile why don’t the rest of you go and get a drink. Tonight it’s on the house."
She grabs Susan by the elbow and forcefully drags her through the crowd.