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Disclaimer: I got the inspiration to write this story while I was reading a story by anonenffan titled “Kim’s crazy theory” which is apparently (I found out about this after writing this) inspired by Jappio's "Amy Stuck in an ENF Story".{if crush==0}{else}

Customize: Use the customize option to change characters name. Changing "Reader's name" is a must otherwise you will see a random name where yours should be. I am not asking for your real name, just type some name to symbolize yourself.

Game Mode: Using Game Mode is recommended to gain full experience. To use game mode click on "start game". Beware that if game mode is on, clicking on links and back button will only return you to current chapter so press 'end game' before clicking on the links and press 'previous chapter' at the end of chapter to go back. One added benefit of game mode is that it saves your progress, but if you want to reset just press 'reset game'. If you see some error try pressing 'reset game' and coming back to that chapter, since I am still updating the story you might see some errors like a paragraph saying you chose a option that you didn't.

Pro Tip: If you don't like a chapter try checking its counterpart in the other branch maybe you will like that one.{endif}

John Smith and Amanda Williams lived in the same flat so you could call them flatmates or roommates whatever you want but not friends. Neither of them liked the other. They were in the same flat only because of financial situations. Initially when they started living together each one found the other attractive but as they get to know each other a little bit they start hating each other (Simply because the writer of this story wants them to) ; both of them find the other's action irritating and even started to mess with each other like the one time John pissed in Amanda's bed or that one time when Amanda had a party with some of her friends (all of them pretty) who keep flirting with John but also teased that they would never sleep with a looser like him. And after the parties(christmas and new year party from last year), they even tried to find other living arrangements but for some reason they were stuck with each other(In reality the writer was forcing them, in fact from now on whenever you think something strange is happening just know that writer wants it to happen so it is happening.)

Today something strange happened John and Amanda both were fired from their respective jobs. Each one wanted to hide this bad news from the other as they knew it would be good for the other. Next day both of them woke up just like every day and pretended to go to work to hide their lack of job from the other. After about 30 minutes both of them returned to their flat (from different sides) thinking they were safe to go back as the other would not return. But as they approached their flat’s door and found each other face to face, each one immediately yelled “I forgot something.”

{if crush==0}{else}Author's Note(1): I highly recommend reading both anonenffan's and Jappio's story. To be honest I have not read Jappio's story completely myself but the few paragraphs I have read were very interesting and I am planning on reading the whole thing.

Just to clarify only thing common with my story and theirs is the fact that a character is aware that he/she has a life that is controlled by someone else. I am not copying someone else's work. I have read anonenffan's story completely he doesn't even use the word writer (he uses the word universe )although when I found that Jappio' s story has a writer I realized anonenffan was deliberately avoiding to use 'writer'.

Author's Note(2): OK, someone just said to me that the cover page of my story doesn't make any sense. So I am writing an explanation for it. One of the character in this story will soon find out that he/she is inside a story. I used this cover page to represent that they are trapped in a storybook( I know CHYOA is a site not a book but it looks cooler that way). Also a second reason will be known by reading the story.{endif}

Author's Note(3): Someone, asked for the links for these two stories so here are they: Kim’s Crazy Theory, Amy Stuck in an ENF Story

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