Susan's Sinfully Deadly competition
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Having stopped a robbery of a nearby Antique Store, Susan Storm is rather pleased with herself having done another good deed for the day. Deciding to help the kind, old man who owns the store Susan comes across an interesting piece among the knick-knacks is a seven-headed dragon a common depiction of the seven deadly sins. Something about this odd little statue speaks to her picking it up she decides to purchase it.
"I'd like to purchase this statue if you don't mind." Susan asks the Store owner.
"Oh don't worry take it consider it a reward for saving me and stopping that robber. I was never going to sell that old thing anyway." The store owner tells Susan.
She tries to protest but the old man won't have any of it and insists Susan take it. Eventually caving to the old man, she returns home to the Baxter Building placing the statue on a stand she notices that the eyes of the statue have gotten dirty. Grabbing a cloth and a cleaning solution she cleans them, Sue notices how the light catches in the gems making it look like the eyes glow.
Eventually, the glowing from the eyes is enough to blind Susan briefly when her vision returned the statue was nothing more than dust and there were 6 other Susan's in the room. Each of these Susans are relatively different from each other though they seem to be themed after the seven deadly sins. The obese Susan weighing at least 300 pounds would be Gluttony-Susan, on her right barely awake and chubby is Sloth-Susan, next to the right of her with the body that would make pornstars jealous is Lust-Susan. Speaking of jealousy possessing a rather average figure and glaring at her and Lust-Susan is Envy-Susan.
'Obviously she'd be jealous of myself I am perfection in female form.' Susan remarks to herself realizing she's Pride-Susan.
Which leaves Greed-Susan who has gone to find as much of the jewelry thew own and wear, leaving Wrath-Susan/Malice who has the body of a professional bodybuilder. Looking over her sin-based sisters Pride-Susan claps her hands getting everyone's attention.
"Alright everyone it would appear that the statue we brought home has made us into personifications of the seven deadly sins of ourselves." Pride-Susan says.
"Yeah, no shit Sherlock thanks for stating the obvious and besides who put you in charge if anyone should be in charge it's me." Malice/Wrath-Susan states.
Rolling her eyes at Malice/Wrath-Susan antics. "It's obvious I should lead I am perfect after all." Pride-Susan replies the haughtiness in her voice surpassing Emma Frost's.
"I could easily take the leadership position easily I see it, I want it, it's mine." Greed-Susan says covered in gold and jewels.
Seeing that this will soon explode into a fight they need a solution. "Alright everyone calm down this isn't going anywhere I propose a competition." Pride-Susan proposes.
"We're listening." Malice/Wrath-Susan says even Sloth-Susan is paying attention.
"This is what we do we go out there see how many people we can corrupt within a week meet back here and whoever wins not only gets to lead but gets to be Susan for the year." Pride-Susan offers as a solution.
The remaining 6 Sin-Susans discuss it amongst themselves whether or not they should do this eventually they come to a decision.
"Alright, Pride we're in may the best sin win." Envy-Susan informs Pride-Susan.
The Seven Deadly Susans leave there room to go out and win there little contest unaware of just how much chaos they'll cause.
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