I've been fortunate to receive very few critical comments, up until now they've all been constructive. To the guy who just told me my work was amateurish, I think you missed the part in the Literotica description stating it's a web-site for amateur story tellers. If you want professional go to Barnes and Noble. * Activity at the new store was drawing Lindy...
Chapter One Kate Turnbull had become a very frustrated lady. At 49, she considered she should be in the prime of her life ... married (her second) to a very successful businessman with two wonderful teenage kids. Most people who knew her would say that she had it all, living in a large luxury two-level beachside home in the leafy suburb of Avalon on Sydney...
Note: All characters and areas portrayed in this story are purely fictitious, and are a product of my imagination. Any resemblance to a person, living or dead is strictly coincidental. 34. A Funny Kind of Day "Charlie, if I lose my grip on this ladder, we will never catch up to this boat." "Then it is a good thing I have it anchored to the bottom of the...
*This picks up immediately following the first story. You can come along for the ride but I suggest reading Part 1. Angela sat in the rocker by the roadside the following afternoon. She quickly and quietly opened her own savings account this morning, depositing several hundred dollars. She would also add a small portion of her paycheck. She was young and sh...
Adult Women Discipline Series - Spanked (This is a fantasy written by myself for fun. It contains spanking, humiliation and fetish; if this bothers you please seek other authors. All characters are 25 years old or older. If I have time this will become a series.)======= In our household two grown women are disciplined, if they disobey my rules. My wife, wh...
A Fantasy created by International Writers Curt B, Julie Van, and this chapter is written by Wunderboi ****** Oscar Botha, the Chief Executive Officer of Rhino Industries, headquartered in Hawkinsville in the U.S. was exhausted after his busy trip to the U.K. and Europe. This was not like him, normally such a schedule would not have tired him but he conced...
Chapter 1 - Fish For Dinner? With a sigh Philip tossed the cigarette butt over the safety rail, sending it crashing into the waves below. It had been about two and a half years since his last vacation, and now here he was, beachside, without the foggiest of ideas about what he should do for fun. Were he younger it would've been a simple. The clubs would'...
Hello and welcome to my readers. Thank you for your votes, feedback and comments on my previous submittals. It is always a pleasure hearing from you. A caveat: this little tale may change the way you look at a popular Holiday confection. Read on and enjoy. ________________________ "VeryMerry Baking Company, fruitcake our specialty, good morning, how may I...
Author's Note This is the first part in a new story series that follows the lives of two friends over the course of one turbulent year - 2010. The story is set in the fictional town of Westborough-on-sea, a seaside town on the south coast of England. Other towns and cities mentioned are real, although individual places within them (such as pubs, café's, ho...
A few months later they were all informally sitting around the dining room table as had become pretty much the custom in the house. Amelia's webcam business was doing fine and she came to visit almost every day now. She was so used to being naked in the house that she now felt it would be out of place and even rude if she started dressing again. "Crescent Gi...