This is my entry for The 750 Word Project. This story is exactly 750 words (per MS word). Because of the word limitation, this is more of an appetizer as opposed to my usual multi-course meal. * "Gift for you." I handed my sister Susan a small box. "Belated birthday present." She looked at the box dubiously. "My birthday was three months ago." I shrugged...
From the imaginations of your favorite Literotica authors comes: Here's more on the event from organizer jezzaz: Is it possible to write a complete story in exactly 750 words? That's the minimum limit that Literotica will accept, and after talking among ourselves, some of the writers on Lit decided to see if we could do it. After all, it's 750 words, righ...
The author VirriV requested feedback on his story Savages. I thought VirriV wasn't successful in getting across his main character Veer as he wanted to get him across. I thought about re-writing part of the scene to show him hopefully how to do it better. Eventually, I decided it would fun to just re-write the scene and publish it. This is nothing like any o...
Lord knows, I should of been gone, And I wouldn't have been here, down on the killin' floor, Yeah Chester Burnett, Howling Wolf's Recording - The Killing Floor * * * * * "Hey, Jim. When'd ya get back?" "Last night. How ya' doin' Hector?" Looking up from his newspaper, Jim Mason nodded, and gestured to the opposite side of the booth, inviting the man t...
To save me some comments and PM's: I've always heard people use "laying out" for sunning. It's apparently an American-only phrase. I know that's grammatically incorrect, but it's what sounds natural to me. ***** The next day, Monday, was beautiful for water skiing, and we had a great morning session. When Mom or Dad skied, Joanna sat next to me, and Kaitly...
Thanks to Gunter99 for his editing. He was very knowledgable about grammar and such and he made several excellent suggestions to improve the plot. This is a slow story about twins drifting into a sexual relationship. Everyone is over 18 years of age. "Hey, Maddie!" said Heather into her cell phone. "Did you have a good time this weekend?" It was the M...
Thanks to Gunter99 for his editing. He was very knowledgable about grammar and such and he made several excellent suggestions to improve the plot. This is a slow story about twins drifting into a sexual relationship. Everyone is over 18 years of age. The next morning, Heather went out of the tent while Michael handled the sleeping bags. "How did you s...
I drifted through Friday morning. My sister had told me in no uncertain terms she wanted to fuck me, my girlfriend had weaseled out of me that I wished I could fuck my sister, and they were all smiles and laughter this morning. Paul was all smiles too, laughing and cutting up with them. Kaitlyn seemed to glow with joy. We water skied, and I did miserable w...
This is a slowly developing love story about two people who happen to be brother and sister. Everyone is over 18 years of age. I was shocked. It was like that magic trick where the magician has the the girl walk through the door and closes it after her, and then when he re-opens it, there is a tiger instead of a girl. Except this time, instead of a girl hav...
Note: I have decided to abandon this story arc. I spent a lot of time writing this chapter and hopefully someone out there will enjoy it, so I am not deleting it. Thanks to blumontecarlo for his editing. This is the first chapter in a story arc that will run four chapters. As it has been a while since Ch 01 and Ch 02, a quick recap: Heather and Michael ar...