Chapter 17: After the party Following the party Jessica took me to her room. She was obviously worked up from the night's activities and a little inebriated from the wine she consumed. When we got there she began by doing a striptease act. She was wearing a long evening gown with a slit up one leg that was as sexy as it was elegant. It showed every curve i...
Notes from the author on part 8: It was nice to see the return of the rough and tumble tita, Stephanie Santos. She is such a fun character to write. The archeological dig mention in the story is not far from the home of my friend on Maui. He went over to check it out. Apparently it's the real thing. My friend reports that archeologists uncovered a camp esta...
Author's Notes: There is very much thinking, remembering, and action in this reconciliation story rewrite. I continue to use multi-syllable words. It's vintage c1992w of what I like to write about as I continue to learn Wordsmithing. Found here are zero hot sex, my own POV, and my typing errors. Thanks for reading my stuff and all cogent feedback (especially...
Author's Note: After being posted, I discovered that in the previous chapter the character of Tala's name was changed to Talia, by my editor and I didn't notice it at the time. This was my mistake since Talia Ra Ghul and Tala are two separate characters, just with similar names. I apologize for any confusion. Also, I would like to thank dragonknightleader f...
This story is part of an ongoing series. The chronological order of my stories is listed in WifeWatchman's biography, which is currently not updating. Stories after Music Box Dancer are: Return To Apple Grove, Media Matters, Swamp Frogs, Man of God, Fathers and Sons. Feedback and constructive criticism is very much appreciated, and I encourage feedback for...
Chapter 5: "Go on, open it." Shona passed the envelope to Mark. "It must be good news. Nobody uses snail mail any more except for special occasions." Mark and Shona were squashed together in Mark's single bed. Both sets of parents had gone away for the weekend, and the couple had taken advantage of their freedom with an all day sex session, finally falli...
This is the first part of an eight-part series. I am submitting it on here in order to get reader feedback and to help improve myself as a writer. Please leave comments or suggestion! Enjoy! * She pulled up to his house in the early evening. Just as she planned, she finished work early, drove to her apartment to fill her small Jetta with as much of her pe...
This story is part of an ongoing series. The chronological order of my stories is listed in WifeWatchman's biography. Feedback and constructive criticism is very much appreciated, and I encourage feedback for ideas. This story contains graphic scenes, language and actions that might be extremely offensive to some people. These scenes, words and actions are...
This story is part of an ongoing series. The chronological order of my stories is listed in WifeWatchman's biography. Feedback and constructive criticism is very much appreciated, and I encourage feedback for ideas. This story contains graphic scenes, language and actions that might be extremely offensive to some people. These scenes, words and actions are...
This story is part of an ongoing series. The chronological order of my stories is listed in WifeWatchman's biography. Feedback and constructive criticism is very much appreciated, and I encourage feedback for ideas. This story contains graphic scenes, language and actions that might be extremely offensive to some people. These scenes, words and actions are...