In Chapter 1 I made a flagrant error in switching tenses and moving from first person to third person in the story. My thanks to all who pointed that out to me in your feedback and a special thanks to those who appreciated the story in spite of my error. I received many notes of appreciation as well as criticism and encouragement to continue with additional...
I have generally retired from writing to spend more time enjoying my golden years. That doesn't mean I won't rework an old story or write a new one when I feel like it. This is a TRUE story I have shared in other venues so little effort was required to share it now with Literotica readers. ***** Consummating My Love - We take our teenage love to the deepe...
[This started with a story by Casey Edwards called 'Dawn's Friends'. It isn't, even implicitly, a criticism of that story. But it made me think about how the relationships described would work, and how I would handle the basic scenario differently. This is a first cut. I've already done a second cut, but it isn't any longer an erotic story; it's become more...
Do not Copy me its not nice! ADULTS ONLY!! If your not an adult, where the hell are your parents? ##Please send any feedback you have or IM me on yahoo messenger! I love to hear from people so feel free. Based on my life: Names have been changed to protect privacy. * * * * * Max was the wildest guy I'd ever met in my entire life. He was 6'2", a wiry...
Introduction This wasn't supposed to be, but is, the first story in a new series I'm writing called 'Betting People'. Each story will be different but will have a common theme. All of the stories in this series will be about people make a wager that results in their becoming intimate. As you will find out while reading them, these stories are, in fact, tal...
This story is told in a series of flashbacks from the main character's perspective. It could only be told in that manner, so in order to avoid confusion, I've used directional arrows to separate the shifts, back for the past, forward for the present. Hopefully this will help avoid confusion and make it a smooth read for everyone. Thanks as always to my edi...
Isn't it funny how things we try to bury under the years of simple silence can have a way of clawing their way to the surface? Sometimes I wonder if there really is such a thing as a secret, or if all these things we don't say are just waiting for the right time to spring up on us. Can a man even hope to conceal his worst sin in this so called information ag...
This is another story based all too firmly in real life; there is much fictional about it, but there are uncomfortably real parts. Well, you write what you know, and I know something about this subject. It also came out a bit longer than I had anticipated. I try to corral my characters, as a rule; these refused, and the story kept writing itself until it re...
There is no sex in this story; hence it is the non-erotic section. --------------------------------------------------------- A double burger with bacon and cheese, a side of fries and a large coke. Now that is how one celebrates a birthday. OK, as birthday meals go a good steak would have been better but it was not in the plans even though it was my birthd...
Hello readers, this is your humble omniscient narrator with an episode in the life of Daisy Elaine Maye; The girl with something extra. She was born in a boy's body and his name was David. When he turned eighteen, he began his transition to becoming Daisy. During the next few years her appearance became completely feminized, and fine. She was also a pretty...