Chapter 4: A secret fantasy In spite of her common sense telling her not to fall for the obvious trap, Daphne entered Jared's apartment again. Between the open kitchen and the dining room there was a high bar-like table with two barstools, where he gestured to sit down. After he summed up a list of available beverages she chose white wine. She observed him...
I wish I could tell you that I had woken up to a blowjob, but that's a thing of fiction. We didn't wake up cuddling, she was on the other side of the bed, the left side. I was on the right side, I normally slept on the left, so sleeping on the right caused me to wake when the sun shined into my eyes. My stomach growled and I quietly got out of bed. I grabbed...
"Jamie, where's Lynn?" I continued my relationship with Lynn and Jamie living together with the dogs, Seymour and Polo. Life couldn't be any better. Never have I been as happy. Living with two, gorgeous 25-year-old women made me feel younger, vibrant, needed, and desirable. Even though I got less sleep and did more outdoor activities, I was never tired in t...
My dear readers... sorry for the wait... He kissed me deeply and I felt his free hand close around my own, gently prying the condom from my grip. "I'll be careful, Sweetness, I promise." Sim's pants and boxers disappeared. I vaguely remember him moving to take them off, but I was so wrapped up in the nervous expectancy of it all that I barely had time to...
Chapter 6 "Hi guys, this is Tony," Tina said as she approached the table with her new boy toy, a handsome twenty-something aspiring artist she had met a week ago at a party. Michael had to suppress a grin. Nowadays, Tina always had a new younger man with her whenever they went out on a double date. "Hey, nice to meet you," Tony said as he folded his tall,...
No one had come all day. The wind blew up from the platform, as the last trains in what passed for a rush hour came and went. The whole station was slow, owing to the holiday. The attendants in the booth up on the ground level had just left for the day, and as the trains clanged away the whole place became silent. Silence makes for a long day at the stand. T...
I have a need to be filled. This is such a need, that I am in constant search for things that attempt to fill it. I had never been certain just where the need lie, so many things have been used in my various attempts. I tried bungee jumping, yoga, college classes, dancing, getting married (THAT was not going to do it!), and getting divorced. I tried filling...
I awoke to the sound of muffled voices and groaned as I rolled over in my bed. My body ached with a vengeance, I felt as though I'd been beaten with a really big stick. Figuratively speaking, I had, and I broke out in giggles as the thought flitted through my mind. I sobered quickly when I heard footsteps approaching my door, and my stomach thrilled in antic...
I know I had some problems with tense. I hope it doesn't ruin the story for you but this is the kind of critique I am hoping for. Enjoy. Encourage me to write more Walking backwards through the party I bumped into her, she was absolutely stunning, instead of frowning she was smiling, she had beautiful blue eyes and without taking my eyes away I was dying...
The author of the original story has given me permission to spoof his story, The Tale of Benjamin Royson. The story is unaltered from how it appears on Lit, except for the addition of my commentary. Check out Sean Renaud's work here on Lit, and be sure to thank him for kindly donating this tale for me to slice and dice mercilessly! Be warned that the origin...