A million thanks to a gloriously picky reader turned proofreader, Steve150177. His work has definitely improved the finished product. As always welcome complaints, comments, and whatever is on your mind. English words are italicized when they appear. Enjoy the chapter! DW ***************** I felt a warm hand on my arm and heard Master Christof's voice...
Synopsis: Before Eclipse, Aliens have lived on earth as humans for decades waiting for the moment to leading up to take it over -- The Eclipse. After Eclipse, Gaelen meets Kiowa, the first human allowed to attend college. Little does he know she is not Y'vori; and she doesn't know he is the King that will lead the final eradication of the humans from the pla...
I shook the handle on the door, made sure it was secure. "Why'd you want to see me, anyway?" said Croc. "It's about Batman," I said. "We're rethinking some assumptions," said the other Harvey. "Shut up, Harvey," I said. "If this is about killing the Bat," said Croc, "it's been tried. I mean, his back was broken, he got shot with a time ray, all the Lazaru...
So, my proofreader made an impassioned plea for votes and IT WORKED. Steve150177 was right and you all placed the last chapter in SECOND PLACE on the Top List. We are both thrilled. It makes writing so much more fun when you know the readers are enjoying. Thank you to all who read and voted. It goes without saying but THANK YOU to Steve150177 for his hard w...
Thanks for all the kind words and VOTES! Just basking in the attention here. Hope everyone enjoys this next chapter. If you see mistakes let me know - I'm always trying to improve. All comments are welcome love it or hate it. A thousand thanks to Steve150177 for his continuous desire to make the story flow well. I really appreciate the hours he spends pro...
Earlier than expected! Thanks to Steve150177 this chapter is out closer to on time than I expected! His work is always appreciated. I think you all see it too, since no one's asked for editing in the last couple chapters. Votes are appreciated as is commentary. Let me know what you think - good or bad. Thanks to your kind votes Chapter 12 is sitting at #...
Here is the next installment of A Slave to the Servants. With the holidays and all I expect your next chapter to be posted about Jan 4, 2012. Someone asked how I pronounce Kein and Ciara. To me Kein sounds like "keen" and Ciara is pronounced like the Spanish word for sky. Many thanks to Steve150177 for his work proofreading. Happy Holidays to everyon...
No real sex in this chapter, just story - fair warning! DW ********* I knelt on a pad in a small room filled with hanging clothes as the men dressed around me. They talked and laughed as they fitted themselves with white linen shirts and brown leather pants. Each of them had several sets of boots and they seemed to pick out the nicer pairs to wear. I r...
Thanks to everyone for all the comments. I know it's different and I appreciate the place to express the craziness in my head. If you're enjoying, please keep reading and let me know what you think. Thanks again - DW ******************************************** I woke up and it was still dark. Master Bane and Master Kein were both stretched out and sound a...
Sarah was a normal 22 year old girl, living in the not too distant future. Life was good, for the most part. Modern medical science had allowed for the elimination of almost all disease, and with the introduction of nano-robotic technology, human life expectancy was said to be doubling without the signs normally associated with aging. Still, there were crime...