Finally, I've got this chapter to a satisfactory state. As with chapter 5, this chapter was originally two. I decided they would work better if I combined them. It really helped the flow and I'm sure many of you will be pleased that it also increased the length of the chapter. I can make no promises of this being the norm for the future, but it works for thi...
Monday morning started as all mornings at the Academy do. With people hustling to get the day started. The slaves were rushing through morning routine. The Trainers were finalizing plans for the days training. Devon oversaw it all. Andre and Geneva traveled to pick up Josh, and found that the Doctor was due in an hour or so to release him. They waited and ch...
Part 08: Conforming to the Lifestyle Waking in the morning, Jeannette got her instructions and left to carry them out. She took the shoes that Master ordered her to wear, and she carried them to the slave training area, and set them down as she turned the lights on. First releasing Geneva from her chains she smiled and said. "Good news Geneva, Master is ple...
Now, there was some confusion when the last chapter posted. Not only was it not Sheeple, it wasn't even my story. We got that fixed. Also, somewhere along the way, someone thought I had ended the story with the last chapter. No, that's this chapter. Yes, gnash teeth, cry, wave pitchforks. It needed to end. There is a surprise in this chapter. Hope you've enj...
CHAPTER 1 I watched the young Marine place two six-packs of beer on the checkout conveyor. "Thank you for your service," the young female cashier said with a big smile. He returned her smile. "Just doing my duty." I felt my stomach tighten. It was the first time I had heard that phrase and it hit like a taser. All the memories I had pushed down into the...
The signs were ready and waiting by the front door. I'd taken the better part of the last couple of days on them because I wanted them to be perfect. Now the hard part. Up the stairs, into the master bedroom, rip off the bedclothes, wrestle the mattress off the queen sized bed and half carry, half slide it down the stairs, down the hall, through the front do...
Edited by the incomparable Mr. Ken Scades. ***** The trick of meddling between an ascendant Goddess and her Synergist, a mystery Zhair'lo had decided to call "Talla's problem", was on Zhair'lo's mind for the entirety of the following day. He wanted to commune with her in the space where the two of them could share thoughts, but found himself unable to do...
Flashback contd. I typed the last line of the second business proposal of the day and leaned back in the chair. It looked good. Although I had taken more than three hours to write the two proposals- about an hour and a half more than what I usually required- it'd been worth it. I saved the document and transferred it to my senior, and took off my spectacle...
Hello Lit! Thanks to everyone for the feedback and comments, Steve and I both read them! I will admit to still being behind on feedback via email. I'm catching up, just slowly! Thanks to all for the constructive advice about clothes vs cloth - oops. A word of advice to aspiring Lit authors - don't procreate, they are s-o-o-o-o time consuming! In a good way...
Hello, Lit! Glad everyone seemed to like the last chapter. Hope this continues to entertain! Many thanks to Steve150177 for his work reading and rereading! His work makes the finished product much more polished. The next chapter is due out May 16. Fair warning: my "bun in the oven" is due to be done baking at the end of May. I think I'll have everythi...