by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith
This is a re-edited version of Chapter 1. (I added to the chapter, and also cut it in half and put half after Chapter 2.) Thank you so much for the feedback, which I'm working hard to take on board.
Please leave comments for me. Thank you! (Diolch.)
Lady Arianna el Jien van Sietter opened her round blue eyes and stared dream...
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NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Please leave comments for me. Thank you! (Diolch.)
*****
Commander-Lord Clair el Maien van Sietter opened his slanted grey eyes and stared dreamily across his floor. Dim light through his curtains glinted on a china statue of a Northern peasant girl which Tashka had brought back for him the previous spring from P'shan. Her china smile and the bright glaze...
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by
ragini15
on Sep 11, 2017
Erotic Couplings
Preface to part-1...
I am staying in a rented house. We have a good relationship with the house owner. The house owner stays in ground floor and 1st floor is given for rent.
My wife has a good friend ship with the house owners. I am rarely speak with them, in case any requirement. Otherwise I just give them a smile and walks away on my way.
My wife used t...
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by
ruwanr
on Sep 17, 2017
Loving Wives
Looking back at events that occurred in our lives in the recent past, i feel that i should have sensed something was amiss ever since the time when my wife announced that she had had a rather strange dream. She said that her parents were trying to set up a new marriage for her. She went on to describe in detail how they had invited a prospective groom to the...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
Novels and Novellas
I have been editing the first couple of chapters and have reposted them up here - new versions of the Prologue and Ch.s 1 and 2 should be up by now. If you are re-reading the story, I would really welcome feedback on whether they are better in the new versions, either in comments on the chapters or via the Feedback form. I haven't got round to tackling the n...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith
My dear reader,
I've been posting these chapters in the hopes of some feedback. I've had very few comments, votes or even anonymous messages via the feedback form. (I am extremely grateful to one person who let me know that the way I use the names in this novel is confusing so I should do some work on that.) The number of views...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Thank you so much for the feedback and votes! :heart:
*****
Arianna walked into the kitchen and there was Clair standing at the cooking range making himself breakfast. He was sloppily dressed in an old pair of breeches slung on over his nightshirt, a woollen cardigan and a pair of slippers. He lifted his head and smiled when he saw her in the doorway: tha...
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Msia Exhibitionist
on Apr 15, 2020
Exhibitionist & Voyeur
Edited by notemale.
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We eventually stopped. I came down from his lap and he asked me to cleanse his cock that was coated with mixture of his cum and my love juice.
"Look at me while you cleanse my cum..." He raised my head and then looked briefly into my eyes to make himself clear.
I was humiliated by his demand to act like a porn star.
I be...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Please leave comments for me. Thank you! (Diolch.)
*****
Vadya walked Midnight slowly down the hill into the river port of Paviat. He had enjoyed a riotous three day journey with Tashka and Pava doing imitations along the way. Pava had made up a particularly successful one of an amorous old court Lady, pretending to look over a fan at the two of them and...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Thank you for comments and feedback. Please make a comment if you have a moment.
I am looking for an editor for the novel, I know I need to do some work on it so feedback is highly valued. Just to mention that I sometimes have to cut the paragraphs about. Ch. 13 was initially rejected as Literotica editors asked me to make the long passages of monologue sh...
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