I've been working on a novel--of sorts--and I wanted some feedback on a particular scene I've been struggling with. Please keep in mind this is a singular scene so character background is not present. Thank you all for reading and for your feedback! ******* The early morning light peaked in through the plastic shades and lit up a corner of the hotel ro...
The funny thing about time is the way it affects the memory, distorts it. I have memories that are only vague recollections. I see them in my mind's eye only in black and white, like a Saturday afternoon matinee on BBC2. Yet all this is fresh in my mind, burned on my soul forever. Ask my peers, and they might give you a different version. Do I care that my m...
This is set in the TV show Modern Family. This story focuses on the character Claire Dunphy. The set up for these stories may be ridiculous, so if super realism is your thing, I apologize. I only do one shots based on specific episodes, and don't plan to change to multi-part stories. If you have any story ideas based on this show/others or if you just wa...
For quite some time my wife, Claire, and I had been using the fantasy of involving one of her work colleagues, Tom, in our lovemaking, resulting in some of the wildest sex we'd ever had in our 12 year relationship. It had taken a little time to get her to admit that she fancied him, but once she did, it made a huge difference. Listening to her shouting his...
Claire's grey haired boss surprised her with a seat upgrade on her first contracted assignment. She was headed to a small town in NC to spend 6 months doing legal work for the firm's largest client. At 27 years old, she was well aware that success on this project would fast track her to partner status. As she settled into her first class seat, she graciously...
It's so easy to look back with perfect 20/20 hindsight and say, "If I would've done this; if I could've done that; if I had only known." But life doesn't work that way, at least it didn't for me. If I had only realized back then that I possessed all of the information I needed to straighten out my life right away, everything might have turned out great. B...
Kali sat on the side of the bed as Claire lay down across her lap. She could feel the warmth of the girl's smooth skin against her bare legs. Claire shifted a little as she found her position and Kali placed her left hand on her lover's back, gently brushing aside her long hair then slowly running her fingers between her shoulders and down her spine. She fel...
CHAPTER 1 -- the first catch There had to be a catch. There always was. And I fell for it every time. I was gullible and generally crap at life. I went to a crap school on a crap estate in a crap town. I wouldn't say my parents were crap, just a bit disorganized. They loved me and each other, just incompetently. I inherited their lack of talent. When the c...
Chapter 07 - The Cabal Samael smirked at the reflected image in the full wall mirror. His body was immaculate, every muscle sculpted by an artist. His tanned skin glistened lightly with the sweat of exertion. His longish brown hair was swept back, revealing piercing, intelligent blue eyes. A close shave outlined his sharp aquiline features. Lying on her ba...
Claire slowly stood up from the bathroom floor, slipped off her unbuttoned blouse and put her bra back on. Her adrenaline was flowing, and her fingers shook as she buttoned her blouse. She glanced over toward her bag where her skirt was neatly draped over the luggage pull bar. It felt good to pull the skirt over her bare ass, more memories flashed in her min...