This is a tutorial, part one, of creating compelling conversations to wow your readers, and propel your story, and dialogue. Creating realistic dialogue is an important aspect of writing. Good conversation simply does not consist of a listing of He said this, she said that, he growled, she purred, they hissed, etcetera. People do not purr, or hiss, or chir...
A Brief Conversation: As both a writer and an editor, I have found that the most common reason for stories being rejected is due to improper formatting of conversations. If you follow the rules set out here, I can't guarantee that your story will be accepted, but it won't be rejected for conversation errors. I strongly recommend the essay How To Make Charac...
Finally spring break was here. All the cool kids were, of course, going away to someplace hot to party. I, on the other hand, didn't have parents who were made of money and would pay for such frivolity. Not that I would ever be invited anyway. Instead I was on my way up to St. Clair, to spend a week and an half earning two college credits in biology as part...
Wednesday "Tess, what time did you tell them to be here?" asks Rob. "5:30pm is what I told Sharon over the phone. They should be here any time." she responds. The doorbell rings. "Luis, would you mind answering the door? It's George and Sharon." Luis opens the door. "Dr. and Mrs. Wills. Please come in." "Well hello again Luis. Glad you could join us th...
We were at the restaurant before we knew it, and we didn't know how we got there, as we were deep in conversation on the way to the restaurant. Paul paid the cabbie and he helped me out. As he did, I noticed a look in his eye that seemed to say that he was enjoying himself, and my company. As we walked in, his arm went around my back as we walked through the...
July 7th 2003 Today my life changed. I am in Brazil and Elizabeth is in Canada, at home. This morning we agreed to hold an erotic late night conversation about our bondage desires. Both of us would think of 2 or 3 new things we would like to bring into our already dominant and submissive relationship. The idea really excited me and I spent quite a bit of my...
I walk into the restaurant - my eyes searching for You. I have followed the instructions that You left on my pillow this morning - to the letter. As requested, I am wearing a red shantung silk form fitting dress, with a heart-shaped yoke ending just above my cleavage, and back cut down to my “other cleavage.” The dress has a high band collar with the lette...
"So I have two friends who couldn't believe you eat your cum from me." I looked at my wife with disbelief. What had she just said? "I'm sorry, what did you say?" "I said, I have two friends who couldn't believe that you lick and swallow your cum from me after we make love." I paused and looked at her. I still wasn't quite sure I had heard her correctly, b...
Part 12: Joe turns up the heat on the gang bang planning. This is the continuation of an email correspondence I had with a woman named Sharon Alderson. If you have not read the previous parts I suggest you go back and read from the beginning to get the full background. This conversation includes elements of wife swapping/sharing and group sex. If you don't...
A champagne bottle sits empty on the table across from me. Looking at it, clouded thoughts fill my mind as I remember sipping from the rose glass champagne flute, feeling the cold, clear liquid dance across my tongue, down the back of my throat. The liquid heating as it reaches my stomach, giving me warmth from the inside out. The cold I feel deep inside my...