Hi folks. I wrote this as a style exercise, trying to get a minimalist, yet erotic effect while scoring as high as possible on the Flesch readability scale on Word's grammar checker. It gets a reading ease over 90 and a grade level of 3. But is it erotic? Please vote. Please comment. It helps me improve. Thanks. * She is eighteen today. She is a virgin....
It was a quiet night at Old Calhoun's bar. Jimmy walked up to the bar and ordered a shot of whiskey. As he drank he looked around just to see how empty the bar actually was. There were a few ladies laughing and having a good time in the back. A man was with them. each woman lay in his arms hanging onto his every word. Jimmy turned back around giving up on th...
The last time I visited home, I passed the old sandlot. There is a house there now, but I could not help but visualise our old chicken-wire backstop, crude frisbee bases, and the pile of dirt we called a pitcher's mound. When the weather was good, all the boys in the neighbourhood (and sometimes the girls, too) would spend their afternoons playing ball on th...
Wolves of were howl, And the cold winds blow. The nights tick by shorter Now. The sky tastes snow. The nights are sable. Halloween quick and hurry Now to me. I had been running. The kind of running a person does for a long time without being aware of it. It was two days till Halloween. There had been ghosts on my neck and on my hands. Ectoplasm filled the n...
it's a short chapter, and there's no sex yet but the next one will be longer i promise. Things had gone from shit to shittier in the space of a phone call. For months now I had been hounding my father, if i could call him that, for information on my mother. Now I've been told there's no way on earth to find her. I disconnect ignoring my father's prote...
I texted Jean when I got to my Motel room. I was still 3 days from Home on a week-long trip that turned into almost 2 weeks. We texted ALOT, sent ALOT of pix, talked on the phone 2 or more times a day, and had a few video chats since I left. I knew Jean was going out with a couple GirlFriends tonight, so I wasn't expecting more than a some texts from Her...l...
Editor's note: this story contains scenes of non-consensual or reluctant sex. ***** In Part 3 (Unbridled Lust), I wrote about how Malti the teenage-age daughter of Vivek's servant Mangesh was ripped after by me and Vivek. After emptying myself inside Malti's ass, I pulled out - tired, drunk and satiated - and grabbed my pants and walked to the room where m...
Debra put the finishing touches on her look for the night; an application of her favorite deep red lipstick over her lips. The color perfectly framed her slender lips and tied her whole look together. After all, she was having guests over. It would be rude not to look her best for them. It complimented the smokey grey eyeshadow that framed her bright green e...
I enter the house and see a white box with a yellow bow interlaced with a neon green one with the word "Slut" written on the attached envelope. Knowing what it means, I open it with trembling hands. "Slut, Wear only what is in the box, and everything in the box. Kneel by the dungeon door and wait. Do not delay, we will be watching. -M and M" Without hesi...
I was pregnant. My husband is a well educated lawyer, runner, good father, and dotting husband. He's funny in the sense that he has really well planned humor. He is tallish like almost 6 feet with a slim profile and a little nerdy. He's blonde and kinda good looking, if you squint hard. I always thought I would end up with someone a little more athletic, but...