Many thanks to talented author/editor HMAuthor for first editing and improving this story. Special thanks to winterhunny713 for fresh perspectives and challenges that resulted in major improvements. The drop-dead gorgeous woman blindsided me in the bar on the last night of the conference while I was gazing at another beautiful woman. "I haven’t figure...
My deepest gratitude to two of the greatest editors helping Literotica writers. The amazing word doctor, SueDanym, first whipped this into something readable. Then Vix_Giovanni gave it a final polish and, in doing so, pointed out a weakness that resulted in major improvements -- and a new title. As I submit this, Vix_Giovanni is in the running for editor of...
Life as a British subject and research into navigable northern waterways, added to the command of English, made the editing contributions of Red_sky_reader not only masterful but also indispensable. Tremendous gratitude to blackRandi1958, winner of the 2017 editor of the year award, who not only fixed some errors but also added a bit of magic that will imme...
Many thanks to editor extraordinaire and fledgling author LovelyAnon, not only for fixing mistakes, but for challenging the writer to do better. Grateful thanks to AdrienneL for catching some small errors and one major one. The German version of this story is posted in German Literotica as Warum hat er Funken in den Augen? by Egon Hoppe. They had managed...
Many thanks to floss83 for first editing and improving this story. Gratitude and thanks to Timid Tiger for further editing and for questions and suggestions that made it much better. And thanks to LenaDearest, thegirlversionofoscarwao and BeautifulStorm, who helped me fix more things that I missed. * "Marlene told me you sometimes fantasize about a three...
Many thanks to Linda62953 for first editing and improving this story. Tremendous gratitude to accomplished Literotica author and editor "The bottom line is I cheated on you tonight. Also, we have to move out of here, or at least I have to." When Eleanor finally understood, she was suddenly wide awake. Her expression turned unto a scowl. "You're not fun...
Many thanks to two accomplished Literotica author/editors -- to HMAuthor for first editing and improving this story, and for further edits making it better to ScarletFrost, who writes sensual/consensual tales of female domination, bobcat-boys, vampires, woman pirates, wolverines and happy slaves. And gratitude to BeautifulStorm, the hardest working editor...
Many thanks to waterfallminnie for first editing and improving this story. Immense gratitude to BeautifulStorm, the hardest working editor on this site, who not only applies incredible expertise but also tremendous effort in following through to make sure the story turns out much better than I ever thought it could be. "I don't understand," Lori said. "Y...
Thank you so much to my wonderful story consultant, Qetesh, for advice and to avarramarie for close detail editing that pointed me to errors and clumsy language that needed fixing. The German version of this story is posted in German Literotica as Überbordende Gerechtigkeit by Egon Hoppe. Raven was waiting in the line to check out at the front desk when s...
The best laid plans, and all that crap - my ending to edrider73's story Cheating Wives Always Slip Up http://www.literotica.com/s/cheating-wives-always-slip-up edrider73 is a master storyteller. There's no denying it. Nobody currently writing on Lit has the same ability to drive a reader absolutely crazy. He'll make you want to scream at the screen, or cri...