Many thanks to BeautifulStorm for first editing and improving this story and to AdrienneL whose editing resulted in major changes that made it much better. * Everyone liked Balek because he was polite, honest, friendly and modest. He also had a great sense of humor, and nothing anyone said ever seemed to bother him -- except on one subject. The exceptio...
~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ Turning the tables - my ending to edrider73's Yo-yo Chronicles Ch.02 http://www.literotica.com/s/yo-yo-chronicles-ch-02 I don't normally do this. I like to finish incomplete stories that have been abandoned, for years, or stories that have open invitations to be completed. I request permission out of respect for the original auth...
Many thanks to SevenSwans252 for first editing and improving this story and to g1dnshwrgr1 for further editing that made it much better. Tremendous gratitude to Ginger_Scent for discovering major flaws that, once fixed, raised the whole story to a higher level. "Oh my god, it's Bozo! What in the world is he doing here?" "Who's Bozo?" asked Don, looking in...
Many thanks to whoredinarygirl for first editing and improving this story. Grateful thanks to Dowageroftwo for further edits, ideas and suggestions that made it much better. I didn't do anything wrong, I told myself as we were walking to the car. Sheila was the one who had made a spectacle of herself with Harry. He had been squeezing her ass with both han...
Tremendous thanks to AdrienneL for making this story vastly better than it was before this skilled editor went to work on it. "I need to talk to you about Eleanor." Logan looked at his wife. He was surprised. "So that's it." "What do you mean?" "Something's been bothering you for a couple of weeks. Eleanor! Huh!" Amelia looked at him quizzically, as if...
My amazing editors knew I had written my last story, so this special project both caught them by surprise and gave them little time to work their wonders. I was accustomed to their talents, but they surprised and touched me by their loyalty, and I can't thank them enough. SueDanym suggested surgery, but I hesitated until a second opinion proved the good doc...
Many thanks to jellybelly2 for first editing and improving this story and to oVerallxaVerage, whose editing helped clean up some weaknesses. Immense gratitude to Alex R., who not only corrects errors but has the rare ability to spot superfluous verbosity and to prune, combine and condense dull passages until they shine. * "I just got my check, Mel," Angel...
This story is a spin-off of my "Revenge in Advance: A Sequel" series, made up of "Revenge in Advance, A Sequel," in which Oscar escapes his wife's plot and gets his own revenge, followed up by "Revenge in Advance, Derby's Dose," a tale of what happened when one wife's revenge went too far, "Revenge in Advance: Pat," in which Oscar arrests and confronts the w...
The following is a continuation of the saga based on edrider73's 2014 story, "Revenge in Advance," in which a wife purchases an insurance policy that ultimately details the revenge her husband would face if he was caught cheating on her. In a nutshell, Oscar, the husband in the story, learns that if he were caught cheating, he would essentially be kidnapped,...
For first editing and improving this story, thanks to author/editor hentaikitten, whose specialty is luscious, sensually saturated interracial matings -- not couples of different skin color but of different species, such as a male demon with a human virgin and an elf with an orc. Tremendous gratitude to the amazing author/editor/organizer blackrandi1958, wi...