I have been editing the first couple of chapters and have reposted them up here - new versions of the Prologue and Ch.s 1 and 2 should be up by now. If you are re-reading the story, I would really welcome feedback on whether they are better in the new versions, either in comments on the chapters or via the Feedback form. I haven't got round to tackling the n...
Let's see, where should I start? Brief description of yours truly, I guess. Goes something like this. Just an ‘ole biker type, 53 years old, a little over six foot, run around 185/190 dependin' on the weather. Got all my teeth, most of my hair that I keep pulled back and tied, a beard that hasn't been trimmed since 1985, and don't really give a good god dam...
Note from Author: "Please do give your feedback at the contact on profile page, I promise I will revert within a day, all the feedbacks and mails keep me going and I will share all my experience with you and will also answer all queries from your end." ***** Okay first of all I would like to extend a big thanks to all the people who have responded to me an...
Thank you for the feedback and votes, especially an anonymous commenter who bought the novel previously before I took it off 'for sale' sites. My last chapter got 1-bombed twice! How great is that? It must be good stuff for the trolls to give it such a thrashing. :) ***** The clean spring sunlight fell through the branches and budding young green leaves...
Thank you so much for the feedback and votes! :heart: ***** Arianna walked into the kitchen and there was Clair standing at the cooking range making himself breakfast. He was sloppily dressed in an old pair of breeches slung on over his nightshirt, a woollen cardigan and a pair of slippers. He lifted his head and smiled when he saw her in the doorway: tha...
Copyright (c) 2015 Naoko Smith Thank you so much for continuing to read and give me such great votes. (Apart from that trolling 1-bomb, LOL.) In early Spring Vadya got a commission to ride through the troops and make a complete assessment of their resources in arms and men. Arianna and Hanya el Jien had written to Clair to put up money for a spring offen...
Chapter 27 I took Jenny to the hardware store and bought all new locks for the exterior doors, including deadbolts that required keys on both sides. That way, I could make sure she didn't go wandering when I had to leave the house. I had to promise her that we'd go to the mall and do some clothes shopping and then have dinner on the way home. She was tired...
Bienvenidos a cuentos de una vida desnudo, yo soy kall, el libro parlanchín, entre mis paginas tengo las historias más fascinantes y vergonzosas sobre chicos que alguna vez has leído, relatos que harán volar tu imaginación y te harán viajar a escenarios nunca antes vistos. Entre mis paginas podrás encontrar brujas malvadas con sus hombres esclavos, príncipes...
A couple of months ago, my friend Jake Rivers put out a call for writers to participate in a story invitational based on three classic songs by Marty Robbins: "El Paso," "Feleena" and "El Paso City." This is a follow-up on to our first invitational in the fall of 2006 with entries based on the Statler Brother's song, "This Bed of Rose's." If there is conti...
Todos los días cuando entras a tu clase en la universidad y vez a Clara sientes la necesidad de hablarle para que por fin separe de tu existencia, pero nunca lo has hecho eco de tus inseguridades han evitado que eso ocurrió, pero te logras convencer de que HOY ES EL DIA, hoy sera el dia en el que lograrás hablarle sin sentir que ves a decir algo estúpido que...