Okay I found an editor and I'm hoping it won't take nearly as long to get CH. 3 started and finished and editted. As always your input is much appreciated and welcome. This chapter is a little longer. This one wasn't editted but the next one will be. Hope you enjoy! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "That's gonna be twenty dollars and seventy cents ma'am." The driver told...
The priest was surprised to see Raphael that morning. What was surprising was that he brought another woman with him- a pale blond lady that did not look at all like the Isabella who had came for her Affirmation not too long ago. They church of the Virgin Margaret did not often see strangers that were outside of the family tree and his curiosity was piqued....
The beginning of a new week for the working guy. Thanks to everyone who has added constructive criticism. I appreciate the help from users on here who actually write the great stories. I am honored to have my stories read by some of the greats and their feedback means a lot to me. Any resemblance to biker gangs, biker rallies, restaurants, or websites on Ea...
I was late for class this morning and I needed to get out of my apartment building fast. The elevator doors opened up and I immediately thought to myself, of course it's full, fuck me. Living on the eleventh floor meant I wasn't taking the stairs. So make a spot and squeeze in. My mind was starting to get exasperated, please nobody pass gas. The only good t...
"That piece certainly shows promise. But it needs more. It lacks fluidity, it seems rigid. I would sum it up by saying it needs more heart, less inhibition." Fulton Davis was the critic and mentor who always tried to help young artists at the annual community art show. It helped when they actually had talent. With gray hair and steely gray eyes he had a dist...
[continued] Elsie fell into bed clutching to her chest the money Kevin had paid her. She'd counted it twice already, just to reassure herself it was all there: one hundred in soft, worn bills. He hadn't tried to stiff her. She was lucky, she knew; didn't lots of men try to avoid paying for sex work after they were finished? But Kevin had dealt honestly with...
The usual disclaimers. All people are 18. It's a fantasy. etc, etc. This was also inspired by someone I met online several years ago. I'm a little bit of an outsider to this fetish and this is kind of my spin on the fetish. I hope I hit your buttons right. ***** Race had never been a big part of my fantasies. Like most white guys (I think), I've typically...
To Addison, sex was a mystery. She was very curious about it starting in her teen years, but many of her questions about it went unanswered. She was raised in a home where the subject was rarely discussed, and when it was, she was warned that having sex was something she should wait to do until after she was married. Her parents were conservative, religious...
AUTHORS NOTE: The building where Eve and Steve take shelter on Helvellyn is real. It exists. But be warned, I've exaggerated the size and condition of it so don't go there in the middle of winter expecting a cosy little bothy, because it isn't. ***** CHAPTER 36: HELEN COLTMAN'S STRIDING EDGE Five AM. We got washed and dressed, packed our rucksacks with th...
At breakfast the next morning, John and I were finishing our oatmeal. I had done the morning chores, brought in the bucket of milk for Mary to filter. She was skimming the cream off of yesterday's milk getting ready to turn it into butter. John said he was going to work up in the North Meadow getting the field ready to plant corn and wanted me to weed the sp...