First, thank you all for the feedback. As you may know, I don't take down any of the comments (good or bad). And yes, that scene was a little camp, though I don't think the phrase "pea-brainedness" is one I've ever heard before in relation to my writing. But, different strokes for different folks. I had a lot of encouraging feedback, and thank you for waitin...
A/N – My dear readers! Thank you to everyone who has emailed me with your praise, encouragement and ideas! I love you all dearly and you keep me writing whenever I feel like throwing my laptop away. It is because of you that I present in all its ten thousand word glory; PART SEVEN!! As always PLEASE rate, comment and email me! I love hearing from you guys an...
Hello Readers, Sorry that it has been so long since I have posted. I have been busy and away from these two for far too long. I hope you all enjoy the last few chapters. I have to admit that I am getting sad that the honeymoon is drawing to a close, but all good things come to an end. Still a few more scenes though. Thank you all for sticking with these tw...
Chapter 17 ** Sunday afternoon ** After re-discovering the deck I've had all along on the roof of my warehouse/studio/house; and also discovering that screwing your best girl from behind while she waves at passing passenger jets is kind of a turn on; it was turning out to be a pretty good day. Despite a bout with a 24 hour bug, I was just about 100% and I...
**Saturday Morning** I knew when I went to bed last night that I wouldn't be able to sleep in. Today was the first day of our first photo shoot for my new company, Red Brick Photography or RBP for short. I should clarify that in ownership, it is my company; but without the help of Britt, my luscious blonde girlfriend, who was currently sprawled, bare-ass na...
[Entertaining at Home is where Susan/Suzette started her adventures. She seems to have taken on a life of her own since then. Thanks, as usual, for the comments, support and suggested plot lines. They are always welcome.] * There are times, I thought, when a neophyte stripper has to dispense with social niceties. Choosing between joshing with a naked tart...
[This series started with Entertaining at Home, but this story includes references to previous events if you don't want to start there. Thanks for all comments, particularly anonymous's plot suggestions. I had planned some of them, honest; the others may be taken up. Hope you enjoy this. Comments always appreciated.] * When you're going into the stripping...
*****Hi dear readers, I would like to ultimately apologize for my chapter being so late. It's been a few busy weeks for me and I wasn't able to concentrate on my ideas as much as I wanted to. But the chapter is now here, so please enjoy it and remember to comment on this story on whether you like it or not! I'd love to get a grasp on what my readers are thin...
May 2, 1945 Leni had been in the basement a long time. She thought this might be the seventh or eighth night. Maybe, she thought, maybe the battle would end soon. She lived with her mother in the center of Berlin in an old, empire style apartment near the large park called the Tiergarten. Her father, even though too old for war, had been drafted by the Volk...
I woke about four in the morning realizing that Frank was not beside me, as I peered through the darkness I could hear him talking softly on the phone in the attached bath. "No, don't arrest her, if you do she'll have to go before the judge. Just put her in one of the cells away from as many people as possible. It's empty? Great, put her toward the back wh...