FBI'S MOST WANTED; A LIST OF DESCRIPTION DOS AND DONTS Half of the stories you see on this website suffer from a simple, and easily-reversible flaw. Show, not tell. Specifically, characters. The paragraph below is an example of a writing style that is unimaginative, cheap, lazy, and unappealing to read. ... "Hi, my name is Brenda. I've been going to Fuckm...
Charlie was not having a good day, despite the sunny nature of the weather outside, the somewhat stereotypically legless sheep resembling clouds, and the annoyingly chirpy twittering of birds. It all seemed quite at odds with the irritation that she was experiencing, and the jocular expression on her brother's face was not helping. "I refuse to believe it,...
Summary: A list of terms to aid in understanding the activities and nature of sissies and cock suckers. Note 1: The author's source material isn't Webster's Dictionary or anything similar, but is drawn from many years of interest in matters sexual and countless conversations, both spoken and online, with other perverts. Note 2: Thanks to Tex Beethoven and...
"Allan? Honey you remembered to take your medication right?" "Just a second I gotta finish this dungeon!" I call back as I hear my mom's voice ring up from the floor below my room. Asthma can wait -- mythic keystone Black Rook Hold comes first, and my group's almost to the final boss. "Allan? The doctor said 8pm every night, you need to take them." "I'...
It had all started with a routine visit to his Doc for a simple prostate exam. After he'd given away his naturally submissive tendencies by pushing back against her finger, his female doctor had decided to test just how submissive he was. She gave him the option to back out if he didn't want to go any further, but she told him that if he did want to go furth...
Dave and Susan begin a beautiful friendship over breakfast. "Nice to meet you Susan Jill Parker. I'm Dave. Dave Ryan," he said offering her his big hand. Seeing her up close, as if seeing her for the first time, he saw her bloodied nose, her split lip, and the discolored, puffy mouse under her eye. His hero, she took as much of a beating as she gave. Those...
Disclaimer: All right, this story is not real. NOT REAL! Not to be read by anyone under the age of 18/21 yadda yadda yadda! I'd love to hear some feedback as per usual. Please feel free to leave me a comment in the COMMENT Box at the end of the page. You see those big empty stars too? Maybe bump those up to five full ones? We wouldn't want them to be empty n...
“School Disco!” Friday night, doors open 8.30 FREE ADMITTANCE (Anyone wearing a school uniform.) I read the poster, which was advertising our favourite night-club, again. Immediately, I rang my friend, Shelly. “ We are going to have so much fun on Friday. P.J.s’, night-club, is having a special night, and we will get the chance to dress up as schoolgi...
I want to make love to you. I want to arouse you and excite you. If I do my job skillfully, I will tease you and delight you, not stopping until you experience an orgasm that will leave you shaking and squirming with delight. A wonderful lassitude will befall you, leaving you drained and contented. Your breathing and heartbeat will return to normal as your...
I like to write edgy gay male stories, but I'd never even heard of the act of sounding before someone remarked on a gay story site that they had trouble finding such stories. I looked the term up and was both intrigued and shocked, wanting to include sounding by one man of another in a story but having no context I could put it in. I usually write from expe...