Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith My dear reader, I've been posting these chapters in the hopes of some feedback. I've had very few comments, votes or even anonymous messages via the feedback form. (I am extremely grateful to one person who let me know that the way I use the names in this novel is confusing so I should do some work on that.) The number of views...
I want to thank Valphund for his wonderful work editing my work. I try to make each part spotless but still he finds so many mistakes. He's the reason this story is readable. I'm a chronic re-writer though, so the version you're about to read isn't the version he worked on and all mistakes in the chapter are mine and mine alone. This part involves a bit of...
Mike liked the local bar. He had a few of the guards in before the shift at the prison and a few more came in after the shift, but not much after that. For sure the guys inside weren't going to drop by. He had a few of the picketers in earlier, but now that midnight was only an hour away, they were on the lines. He washed the last glass and decided that the...
A Devilish smile crossed my face as she asked me what was behind my back. "A surprise. I think you'll really like it." "Ooh, what is it" "You'll see" Kay, my current lover lounged across the bed. "My roommate won't be back till tomorrow, we can have all the fun we want." I brought out my surprise: a blue plastic freezy-pop. " I saw it and thought of...
Story 1 - Home Delivery It could have been the board meeting of any company at any boardroom table. But it wasn't. This was the weekly meeting of the executive of The Agency. The executive was made up of the seven departmental executive officers and Elizabeth Monaghan, founder and chief executive, who was seated in the plush leather chair at the end of the...
Chapter 4 Donna returned to the spare bedroom where Ken was still waiting on the couch after conducting her daily milking session using the erotic vacuum milking bra, but she had changed into one of her sexy vintage mid-fifties outfits similar to the one she wore last week. It had worked perfectly in helping Ken produce an excellent, extra-large semen donat...
This is exciting, I finally got to get up from heaven and go somewhere. Nothing major like a drug house or anything, but after drinking coke for two hours with nothing to do anything is welcome. Skidding to a stop next to the car I give Gomer a questioning look. His name isn't Gomer, his name is Anthony Pyle he just really liked Jim Nabors in Gomer Pyle USMC...
Chapter 13 What you hear is the sound of your own breathing, heavy from having an opponent who pushes your limits, light when confronting someone of less skill, or balanced and steady when evenly matched. Michael was breathing heavily, his total focus on his opponent, his vision both obscured and enhanced by the limited view through the tightly woven mesh....
CHAPTER TWO WELL-TRAINED The present Derek was moved into some kind of vehicle for a few hours. He could feel it running on the roads. He was blindfolded, of course, but when he was transferred to another place again, there was an unmistakable scent of sea air. "Do you know where you are?" A feminine voice asked him. He wasn't sure he should say anything....
During my junior year of college, I shared a house off campus. Over the summer there were just two of us, myself and a graduate student named Heather. She was tall, blonde, and attractive. We got along well and shared meals sometimes, but we never really hung out together. She was several years older than me, she had her work and her friends, and I always as...