"He's wonderful," I overheard Susan confessed to someone on the phone as I walked into her apartment. "I know we have talked about this in the past. Meeting someone online does work and I really think you should try the web site I used." I stood in the doorway of the living room and gazed with delight at my new girlfriend and lover. I have to agree, my for...
First time submission. Most of this came to me in the middle of the night. I had a small idea I wanted to write down so I wouldn't forget, and then this came out. Did some editing with a friend and had to find another word processor to spell check. All comments welcome, even the mean ones- I'm a new writer so even unconstructive criticism can be useful. Hope...
This story is dedicated to Azriel15 for all his contributions on Facial Forum, and for being supportive of my writing. * Lucia was frustrated as she paced back and forth at the optometrist's office. Despite new glasses, not reading at night, and getting plenty of vitamins, her eyesight had been rapidly degrading; to the point that she needed to get a new...
"This view is amazing." Ash called through the radio. "Too true!" Sonya said back, sitting at the helicopter's controls. They were flying over an azure blue ocean, off the southern coast of India. "What's this thing's top speed?" Asked Em. "130 knots." Sonya replied. "What are we doing?" "100." "Then let's pump it up!" Em leaned across to try force S...
"One Slip" by Patricia51 Patricia51 writes great stories. One "One Slip" was the tale of a faithful wife's one-time slip up. There really wasn't anything wrong with the story -- in fact, it's actually very good. So where did P51 go wrong? She didn't do anything wrong, unless you count that she left it wide open for hacks like me to write alternative endings...
Please read Part 1 before proceeding with this story Summary: Surma was a haughty, high society, over smart girl. Rakesh was a middle class, not so smart boy who was in love with Surma. He had lusted after her for months before one day deciding to make his move. He forced himself on Surma during a school trip out of town and made passionate love to her. He...
"Fucking webslinger, get your crotch outa my face or I'll tear it apart!" Komodo was baring his fangs at Spinner. Spinner was, as always, hanging down from a beam, his crotch directly in front of Komodo's nose. And he had a boner. Nice. Leaning against the bar, I watched the action. "Come on, big boy, we all know you want this bone," Spinner taunted, swing...
There I was, laying on my back, naked as the day I was born, on a lumpy mattress in a grade B motel just over the causeway from the New Jersey resort town at which my family summered. I was 18 years old then, a "rising senior" in high school, and working at my first summer job. I had gotten to this place with my boss at the gift shop where I was working. We...
"I hate this place, it just reeks of desperation." This from the slightly frumpy woman next to her. An icebreaker. Elise looked at woman next to her, noting the hypocrisy in her statement, given that she was here drinking her little floral drinks, and then smiled the false smile she gave people she detested. Fuck, these people don't have half a clue how pat...
It was half past ten on a sunny Saturday in June and Amy was in the garden trying to decide where she wanted her husband Brian to place some new decking. They had recently bought a new hot tub but it had been hastily set up and really needed a new home and on a new area of decking seemed ideal. As Amy started to pace out some measurements she heard a knock a...