When the website first showed up, not many people paid attention, but it soon amassed a following. It was called Tower of Voices and users could connect, multiple at a time, to see realistic moment by moment video of what seemed to be the inside of some fantastical tower in a magical world. It was fascinating, but there was no way to interact with this world...
As I work on the 3rd part of this tale, comments may affect how I edit it; so please feel free to provide me with some feedback as well as a vote if you'll be so kind. Gabby's next stop was the local pet clinic. Just the same as with people, Gabby could sense what animals felt, and she was more than strong enough to heft as much weight as any boy her age....
Thursday was a busy day for all the active Sisters. Now that the interviews for Big Sisters had been completed, it was time for the chapter to decide who would mentor who. They met on Thursday afternoon to determine who they felt was the best fit for each potential. Thursday night, after they conferred as to who would be the best Big Sister for each potent...
I take your hand and guide you through the darkened room towards the hallway. Walking away from your room, you start to hear the sound of running water from beyond the closed door to the bathroom. I stop at the door, and turn to you. Taking your upturned face into my hands, I guide your mouth to mine. I kiss you deeply, letting my tongue explore your mouth a...
It was an elegant soiree. The St Valentine's Day dinner was served with the finest crystal and china at the Total Woman Excursions' formal dining room: ordures, wine, raw oysters (of course), light salads, gazpacho, poultry and seafood entrées, steamed vegetables: a healthy repasse for healthy lifestyles. The tuxedoed and gowned partygoers mingled in a pos...
Some geographical and anthropological situations are fictional creations, viz the asteroid strike. All characters are fictional and above eighteen. The word Hijra also has been used with some license as readers familiar with Indian subcontinent culture would notice. ***** Asteroid impact causes physical mutations and erotic culture in aboriginal tribe...
I arrive this morning knowing that you have a surprise for me, something that we had discussed and have planned for a while. I am apprehensive of what we planned for today, I am unsure if I am ready to take this step in our relationship, if by introducing another to our bedroom that the dynamics we have will alter, if I can go back to being just us, if I wil...
Well the day has finally arrived. It’s time for us to get away, just the two of us. The trip to the Poconos is much better this year. The snow and ice are on the ground this time, not in the air and on the windshield. We check in and make our dinner plans for the evening. When we arrive at our room, we unpack and then take a few minutes to relax before dinne...
As Charlotte got down off the tour bus she was aware of two things almost at the same moment, that she was feeling strangely sexually excited from the jolting and vibration of the bus, and that the on-site tour guide waiting for them to disembark was the most beautiful man she had seen in a very long time, a trim, even androgynous and slightly sinister Cambo...
I know how very few people comment, much less provide criticism on stories online. Giving criticism, however, easy for the reader and helpful to the author. This guide isn't just for stories, I've found it useful in almost anything I've ever read, watched or played. In fact, I've even used it on food. That's just how versatile criticism can be. However, for...