I recently posted a story (see Vickie, The Baby and Me) with alternative endings and as I had predicted the feedback was both good and bad and the break down was pretty close to what I had predicted. - 9 got on me about grammar, structure, punctuation and the like. - 4 said, "You suck" or other words that meant the same thing. - 7 suggested other possible en...
Respectability is beginning to close in around Benni. He is given another task more suited to a much older and experienced specialist in the field of strategic business development. Benni's approach is ad hoc but he does get assistance from a beautiful woman who works for the enemy – the mall. With Benni being Benni the hero is bound to pull this one off, bu...
Back when I was dating, I pretty much was open to anything that gave me the opportunity to try something different and had the possibility of a new sexual adventure. I had been dating my guy for a few weeks and so far it had been a tame relationship in as far as what we did for sexual excitement. We had talked about our sexual desires and exchanged stories...
Holly May Dawn surveyed her spare room, boxes spread all over the floor shaking her head she thought to herself `How on earth am I going to sort all this out for the new car boot season.` Cursing out loud as the bottom dropped out of one of the boxes scattering items all over the place. Sighing deeply Dawn picked up her phone "Hi Holly how's it going?" "...
This is a fictional account. Author's Note: Hope you all like this 4th story in the Two Captives series. I appreciate your feedback. Thanks to Techsan for his incredible editing. * When Sarah pulled Two Bears through his tepee door flap, she pushed him down on the bearskin rugs in the middle. Sarah closed the flap as Two Bears reached for a log and added...
This story was intended to be a romance-adventure...of sorts. But, its futuristic setting also makes it a Sci/fi-adventure as well. When I started this, I had no idea which category I should put it in...and at the time of submission still may not be sure. Pronunciation on some of the characters is as follows.... Keeqoht: key – COAT Hok'ee: HOKE – ee As...
My first time... I'll start at the very beginning. I'd been with my boyfriend Nigel for several years, though we lived apart. Things between us were great at the start, but over time due to the distance and both of our jobs the relationship strained. We stopped making the effort to get up and down to see one another and phone calls ended up in arguments ov...
Lisa and I had been awakened by the sound of my alarm clock, which I wanted to fire through the window but had a second thought about it, when she realized it was Saturday and we weren't working. "Joe. Did you set that for any specific reason?' "Sorry baby, I must have thought it was a work day today. You go back to sleep, I'm going to stay up and make som...
All participants in this fiction are over eighteen. This story has incest, spanking, oral, anal, group and lesbian sex. Also lactating tits, cheating wives and a bunch of other stuff. You have been warned. It's way, way over the top. If it's too long, or wrong category, gee I'm so sorry. Go watch tv. It's all in fun. IT IS A FANTASY. ***** The signs were a...
Note: I had hoped to finish a different story, in three chapters about three loves of a man, but sometimes stories write themselves and this one took on a life of its own. If I can ever get it under control, I'll submit it. But I don't have high hopes for that one. Meanwhile here is a tale that I guess you could call a flash story because it is fairly short...