OK, this is the opening chapter to my little novel – I think the prologue may have been a little confusing but it was really just to set the stage and background, hopefully this is a bit more straightforward. Any feedback is greatly appreciated this is the first time I have actually written anything major, although I do have my roughs from college the whole...
Any and all comments are wanted, though constructive are more welcome. ************ "Yes." Rachel shuddered as Brian brushed her thigh with his finger tips. "Look, I know that you want me too be absolutely sure before we have sex but I'll NEVER be ready. You're right." She sighed. "Our experiences with people have messed up our perceptions. With me I'll p...
A little background: this story is based in an ancient Egypt-like society, this is kind of just like an excerpt of a larger story-line, but the jist is that there are kings and princes and they keep large harems. It's unfinished but I'd appreciate some feedback. I'm kinda trying to combine older more formal language with modern sex language so its still hot...
I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to get this posted. But hopefully it is worth the wait. I have also submitted chapter six at the same time, so I hope that they post together. All feedback is welcome. * Aric looked over his shoulder at the naked woman that was sprawled across his bed. Her continuing gasps, told their own story. Ellen was still lost i...
The phone rang as Keith just finished telling me he loved me. It was Susie. "Hi, Nancy," said Susie. "How's it going?" "Fine," I replied smiling at Keith while pointing to a picture of Susie and me in a framed picture. "Are you dating anyone, Nancy? Bill has this great friend I'd like to set you up with," stated Susie. "Oh, that's so nice of you, Susie,...
Chapter 21 Poppy looked sad. She always did whenever she was brought to the vet. Not having her mom with her made matters worse that day, even though Chris had been giving her treats every five minutes. He knew for certain that she was going to hiss at Luciana once she went home. Ever since she got Poppy, Luciana was the one to bring her for her bi-annua...
Authors Note: Thank you to everyone left comments or sent me feedback about previous chapters of this story. Thank you again to Margaret who proofread for me. ~ellie Peri fidgeted nervously. Andie had been so good over the holidays at choosing her wardrobe that she had agreed to let her make a quick shopping trip for something sexy for her weekend away with...
Thursday morning, September 12, 1957 at just after six o'clock, Diana Richards awoke from a disturbing nightmare and with a funny feeling. She lay in bed for a moment trying to figure out what it was besides the dream that woke her up. Then she felt it... the muscles of her abdomen contracted harder than she'd ever felt them do so before. Dr. Hamilton had to...
Author's note: This is a work of fiction. All characters are fictional and 18 or older. Contains sci-fi. Not intended to be realistic. Actions described are highly not advised. Always get consent:) Do not copy or repost this story!! Enjoy. ***** Five days after Larissa and I had sex she showed up on my doorstep looking three months pregnant. We had both ta...
Dear Readers, Anne has had two boys but the difficulty isn't over. Enjoy, KemMyst ****************** "The boys are hungry." "She's unconscious. The boys will have to wait awhile." "We can't let them starve. Is there someone in your pack?" "Temperance is nursing, but we can't move Anne. And they won't starve in a couple of hours." Ethan added another...