Mentality Edits Stories

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Happy Birthday, The Letter

by tsememgb on Jan 1, 2019
Loving Wives

Note: This is an edited version of my first try at a story. I have taken the constructive criticisms I received, made a few edits and am reposting it. My intention is that this is the first of a four part story with the next three parts detailing the events of Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. I am a long term member and reader of stories on Literotica. This is...

Death in the Shell Ch. 03

by ElectricOutcast2X on Oct 29, 2018
Celebrities & Fan Fiction

A/N: I'm close to finishing the final chapter and it should be out hopefully by Friday. Around last month I made some edits to this chapter in order to make it appropriately reflect the direction I'm taking with this story and to also alleviate some confusion. Happy reading everyone. Standard Disclaimers Apply ***** Whitney's mind had been heavy these pas...

Make Big Bucks Selling Fiction

by BarbraNovac on Sep 11, 2017
How To

So, you're a popular writer on Lit. You get up to 16 even 30 thousand readers for your stories sometimes. You get positive reader feedback. Some readers say you turned them on, some readers say you changed their life. You get pretty good ratings and even the occasional red H, green E or blue W. So how do you turn this knowledge into money? The best way I h...

Tech Support

by FNEFONAF on Apr 22, 2025

How it all began, Nick had just gotten out of the shower when the boss rang his phone. "No... Not now." He said with a groan to himself, having made plans to go out to the local bar tonight to find some lucky lady to wine and dine. Reluctantly though he answered the phone anyways. "Yeah, hi, okay Boss, what is it?" Rolling his eyes as he...

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Confessions of a Quibbler

by estragon on Sep 16, 2017
Reviews & Essays

I confess it freely and deny it not--I am a quibbler, and I love to quibble. That's copy editing. I say I won't mess around with plot, character or continuity. Those are the provinces of the author. I do the mechanicals--spelling, grammar, syntax, sentence structure. They are the off-putting little details that distract the reader, when the reader should b...

Royal Solitude

by LunaCee on Sep 26, 2017
Romance

Before we begin, we need to settle one important factor: Do we follow a prince or a princess? (Note: This story is moderated and open to other writers. Additions welcomed happily.) (Note: Fair warning-- sometimes my edits will literally be one word or a missing punctuation. I get a little OCD over editing things...) (Cover image: Empty Throne (3D) by Alex Re...

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Master and the Maid Ch. 03

by Saint79 on Oct 13, 2017
NonHuman

Author's Note: Thanks once again for being a part of the Master and the Maid series here on Literotica. I appreciate everyone's input on the story and I honestly did not expect the reaction that I received for this story. You guys and gals are awesome and I hope you all continue to enjoy the story as much as I am enjoying writing it. Big shout out to hentaik...

Playtime in Jamaica Ch. 03

by wifewatchingdreams on Sep 18, 2017
Loving Wives

After they finished resting from a great fucking and the thought of Marni fucking Mark was out in the open, Rob headed off to the gym to work out. Marni had a deadline to finish. It wasn't much but she had to get it done. She wanted a little bit of space from the room though, so she headed off to the resort coffee bar. Marni was sipping on her almond milk l...

Pt. 03 - Doctor: I Need You

by Xyta_Midnyte on Feb 12, 2019
Text With Audio

It's been so hard, so painful, this road. But now I know what to do. I have a plan to save us both and end it all. It's the perfect way to ensure that you and I, stay together forever. I don't mind if you don't love me. No one has ever been able to love the same way I can. My love is pure, all encompassing and powerful. But that's okay . . . I'll still sav...

Charlie and the Factory Ch. 01

by TheChadDupree on Sep 12, 2018
Exhibitionist & Voyeur

Let me tell y'all a story about a woman I used to know. I walked through the Factory in a cold night in January. When I walked through, all my olfactories felt a tingle. I looked around at the people for a symbol. This was no Willy Wonka chocolate. Past athletes from my childhood, married men committing infidelity, Singles... This was a whole different kind...