This story is part of an ongoing series. The chronological order of my stories is listed in WifeWatchman's biography. Feedback and constructive criticism is very much appreciated, and I encourage feedback for ideas. This story contains graphic scenes, language and actions that might be extremely offensive to some people. These scenes, words and actions are...
Please give feedback if you have a moment. I'm very keen to improve this story. Public comments or Anonymous feedback using the 'Send Feedback' button are both great :). I relish critical comments and am not at all sensitive about having weaknesses in my writing pointed out. ***** Anna! Anna!" a quick husky voice was saying in her ear. "Mm-mm?" she murmu...
Norm The days that followed came and went in a blur of activity. Tilly's disappearance and my search for her had stalled our plans, but had not derailed them. This window of time was critical if we were to build a future on the farm. I spent half of that first day worrying over how best to approach Nock about managing our growing network. Something had put...
Let me apologize it has taken me so long to get the next chapter up. Thank you to everyone sending their well wishes for my mum, my family and myself. All comments are appreciated, and I hope to get the next chapter up sooner. ~~~~~ I hear Rosy's distinctive footsteps in the hallway, light and quick, as she heads for the bathroom. Slowly everyone settle...
After some of the comments I got the first time around, I made some pretty substantial edits to this chapter mainly in the second half. Part of the reason for my delay in posting a new chapter being that I wasn't satisfied with the job I did on this one. Hope you all like it! * Ben found a sandwich place nearby the hotel that had excellent reviews, and it...
The van Sietter Bride Who Brought Happiness in Her Pocket Part 2 of 3 (Not much sex in this bit) She was pretty. The daughter of the el Shostas was a plump curving creature with golden hair dressed simply on her head. She had a sweetly full bosom, a tidy curve into her waist and then an appealing curve out round her hips. She probably had a good fresh...
*Author's note: I prefer writing stories that are unlikely but plausible, and this one fits the bill. Nineteen-year old men don't marry 90-year old women—ever. But (sometimes much) younger men and (sometimes much) older women (and vice versa) hook up a lot more often than people think, and occasionally even marry. I have a cousin, who when she was 19, marrie...
I was wonderfully warm, my body wrapped in what felt like leather blankets. My cheek rested on leather, beneath which I could feel and hear a slow thumping sensation. I snuggled against the warm hide, sighing softly. I finally opened my eyes and wriggled a little, feeling the fastenings of a leather jerkin pressing against my ribs and hip through my dress. I...
INTRODUCTION, DISCLAIMER & TRIGGER WARNING - At her Virginia Beach high school in early 2001, 18-year-old theatre kid Janelle Jepson is a real drama queen, her head in the clouds as she dreams of becoming a famous cinema, TV or theatre actress. Young Janelle often appears on the verge of breaking into song when she gets over-excited, but she does have a secr...
Author's notes: Thank you for taking a chance and reading my work. I hope you enjoy it and would love some constructive criticism of the story if you have the time and inclination. This is entirely a work of fiction and the characters are not based on any people, living or dead. Any resemblance you might make is entirely coincidental. Oh, and Erik likes to...