Foreword Thank you to those who have taken the time to read my story and especially to those who have commented. I hope you think it was worthwhile. Writing is a strange experience, a compulsion which makes for hard work and leads to unexpected results. I've done my best to get this post finished as quickly as I can and have beaten my weekly schedule. But...
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Thanks to those that sent private emails and commented on Lit. Every suggestion is taken to heart, and a few of those you will see here, but they are only a taste of 'things to come.' Thanks to my editor, JonB1969 for his eyeballs. And Special thanks to Masterswench for this chapter. We last left G & H on Friday night after her punishment (...
Author's note: The beginning of this series represented a number of challenges for me, one of which was writing the story entirely in the first person. However, I find that I want to introduce more information than Sarah can know, especially the thoughts and impressions of certain transient characters, thus making it possible to juxtapose her experiences wit...
The Beginning Maybe you know the old tale that if a frog is placed in boiling water, it will jump out. But if the frog is put in cold water that is slowly heated, it will not see the danger and will be cooked. Though I knew that tale, I didn't recognize that it applied to me too. I now see this anecdote as a metaphor for my inability or unwillingness to r...
We could see the Space Station. Gently rotating around its axis. 400 year history, it was massive almost 5 miles across by some accounts, it had to be, since many number of people were using it as a stop station to earth and all. Any number of days you could see aliens on it just living their lives normally, waiting to eventually move on to next part of thei...
Hi Folks. First I'd like to thank you guys and you ladies too for all of the comments and letters on last week's story. Some of you seemed to get really upset about it. It left me wondering if your anger was really about the story, or simply your feelings about the theories on birth order. I got a lot of E-mails from people who explained how badly they were...
If you've read the account of the first time my (then) future wife cuckolded me (Laurie and George), you might remember that it was a night of many firsts for both of us – physically and emotionally. What indirectly led to her sleeping with my friend was a story she related to me a few weeks before that fateful day about being approached by several guys in t...
Chapter 11- Thursday June 12 11:00 AM It was almost eleven o'clock when I woke up the following morning. After a long shower I took the advice of the motel clerk and went back down to route 6 to the Eighteen Wheeler Restaurant to eat. The food was good and there was plenty of it. While I was eating I was able relaxed for the first time since this all starte...
Hey Fuckers! This story ain't over till I say it's over! And there will be music! "All aboard! Ha ha ha ha ha ha haaaa! Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay, Ay" And there will be mistakes! But are you not entertained? - I enjoy feedback, comments, and constructive criticism. Feel free to drop me a note. Especially a real bad grammar mistake! I am curious as to how old...
It's not every day that you step out of a portal to find yourself something like a thousand miles away from where you were a few moments ago, and then catch some half-naked religious weirdo in the act of trying to stick something six inches long, hard and throbbing into a close female acquaintance of yours! Yes, the damned blood covered obsidian dagger was...