Just a quick note. This story was my first attempt at writing a story a year or so ago. I posted it on another site which some of you probably read. So yeah, I know what you're going to say. Yes, it is my story with a rewrite. The story was ok but was a mechanical disaster the first time. Punctuation, sentence structure, typos, etc... were really bad and it...
6. 'Family Problems' Frank saw the large contingent of men, standing outside Tony's house, as he was on his way to take Antonia out for the day. He was ordered to stop by an armed man, who told him to cross the street, and be on his way. "It is going to be very hard for me to get Antonia, from over there." He laughed, "So you are the guinea pig?" "Yeah, Ton...
I woke up Friday morning around eleven. Josie lay next to me peacefully sleeping. The more I looked at her the more I thought of her as an angel. With the urgent need to pee and to get something to drink I reluctantly left the bed. After taking care of my morning pee hard on I went to the kitchen to make some coffee. I sat at the counter and drank my coffe...
When I was 10 and my sister Maxine was 7, something happened that changed our lives forever, especially mine. Max, as our family called her, and I got along great as kids. She was this adorable child with big brown eyes and thick dark curly hair, but she had a slight birth defect that caused her to walk with a limp, and it meant she couldn't run well. So, ki...
Jarrik's last memories of Boston were neatness and politeness. The stainless steel tweezers to turn the needle for the suture were sparkling. The boundaries of the surgery site were formed by straight lines of medical tape. Skin was inside the rectangle. Outside the rectangle was a blue sheet with the fold marks from storage. The anesthetist was sitting on a...
This is my first story in quite a while. I want to thank my editors for rereading it and offering suggestions. It is a little longer than I originally intended, but I got carried away. If you do not care for interracial sex, please do not read it. As always, I welcome your thoughts and critiques, but be nice! I have already started part two. Tragedy and Lo...
*Author's Note: The medical board is obviously fictitious. The proceedings and timelines aren't accurate, but they're 'close enough for government work'. :-) **** "You're lucky. It was a clean break. I'd say you'll be out of the cast in four weeks. From there we'll reassess and see how long you'll need to be in a splint." "So...no more jumping out of pe...
I deeply appreciate the enthusiastic reception you gave Whatever Your Heart Desires. It made me feel like a million bucks to write it, and doubly-so that you felt the same to read it. This is the mirror image of that story; a much darker telling for those of you who like it nasty. This story contains some unpleasant, but real-life imagery. It is entirely fic...
"Mom? Can I go back for some more?" She glanced at her boyfriend's face and saw the look of disapproval, yet another sign this relationship was a huge mistake, before saying, "Sure. Go ahead, buddy." The heavyset 11-year old pushed back from the table then headed for the buffet to fill a second plate as the man his mom was dating watched him walk, shaking...
Author's note: This one's a little less dark than the last two. I guess we're too close to the holidays to be depressed. As usual I'd like to thank all of you for taking your valuable time reading this story. I'd also like to thank Mikothebaby for editing it. Originally we were going to use the names of the crew on the love boat TV series. We didn't because...