Hello! I have been a Literotica reader since 2007. I have been overall impressed by the quality of writing on the site and I appreciate the work everyone does in creating their stories and admire the courage it takes to post a story. I commend all those who have used Lit to develop as a writer. That said, often I am a picky reader and have noticed things...
He was angry with me, I could tell by the way he slammed around the kitchen and left his dishes in the sink. Something had pissed him off, maybe my reluctance to go to the beach on the spur of the moment, maybe I watched, too long, a man walk by in the mall and I shouldn't have. We were still young and I forgave so much of it, I forgive a lot. He was leanin...
Author's Note: They say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery... Oggbashan, who is Literotica's King of the Fifteen Fifty-Word Stories, gave us all carte blanche to adopt his model when he won the 2006 How-To Contest with his "How to Write a Fifty-Word Story" essay. I can only hope I did the genre justice half as well as he does. (And believe me, I now...
I am in a polyamorous triad, dating another woman and a man. It's not a true, equal triad, because I never get to see Alexandra very often and I live with Will, so I see him every day. This past weekend was really nice, though, because the three of us were out of town and had rented a hotel room with a nice king-sized bed. Sunday morning, we decided to take...
I can see one of our afternoon meetings. You and I are "fuck buddies" as you call it, insatiable together. I arrive after your last class at your apartment. It's early September, warm with a little breeze. You greet me at the door in short cutoffs and a belly shirt; your hair pinned up and back. Our shared grins tell it all. I sweep you into my arms and ki...
I hadn't seen my estranged lover in a few months and my plan was to film the first time we saw each other next, so I booked a filmmaker for an on-camera consultation. I could tell the director was pleased when I arrived and he evaluated his subject: he took in my long, shapely legs and hourglass figure first - slender but round in all the right places; and t...
In the manner of Gregory Maguire, who provided us with a version of the childhood standard The Wizard of Oz through the eyes of the "wicked" witch, I have re-written my favorite BDSM story, Both Master and Slave, written by Martin Sharpe (published in 2001 by Silver Moon Books in Great Britain), from the point of view of the submissive, rather than the Maste...
After my swim I felt something in me. Like I love being naked and defeated and at the mercy of my rival. I wanted it to happen again and again. After the swim at my school other students giggled at me hearing the rumors about the swim and how I accidentally lost my bikini and was forced to bow to her naked. It did not take her long to challenge me again. T...
It had been a rough day at work, but I was finally home. I tossed my car keys onto the kitchen counter and removed off my shoes. As I loosened my tie, I called to my wife Paige. She didn't answer, so I ambled down the hallway to find her. Paige was sprawling languidly on our bed. Her porcelain skin was flushed. I noticed that her pink nipples were erect. One...
We sit in a warm bath, lavender bath salts bubbling around us. My back, my head lean against your chest while you rest your head on top of mine. I feel your fingers run up and down my arms, across my collar bone. I close my eyes and take in the sensation. I roll my head back, giving you the opportunity to lay gentle kisses along my neck. I don't think I've e...