Preface: I want feedback, as I want this first chapter to make you beg for the second chapter, or else I'm not doing my job. Warning, it is the first chapter of a novel. So it reads like one also. Not much "action", but I feel like it makes up for it in psychological awareness. *** Chapter 1: On my way to work The walk from my apartment to the hospital...
Never been to one of these before, but she tells me I'll enjoy it. I don't see how men covered in layer upon layer of amour gliding around on a man made frozen lake, beating each other senseless over tiny black disc that none of them can touch, could be in any way entertaining. We pulled up to the arena. Surrounded by pick up trucks and screaming, painted fa...
I just finished packing my bags and I was ready to go. I was a bit nervous, but excited at the same time. All I had to pack was a towel, sunscreen, and water. All I was wearing was a sundress and sunglasses. Today was the day I take my nudity public. I had enjoyed the feeling of being naked as far back as I remember. The softness of the bedsheets as I slept...
132 Dollars Laura slipped into her bedroom just after ten o'clock, her teeth brushed and her flannel pyjamas on. "Good night, mom," she called out. "Good night, dad." "'night sweetie," her mom called back. "We're at the soup kitchen tomorrow, remember." "Of course," she replied softly, closing the door and turning off the lights. I paid my debt, sh...
College ramped up on me. After seeing how the last story was rated I decided to give the series a bit of a rest, but now with a good amount of time (and due to a lot of people's requests) I am writing the series again. Thank you for all of your comments, and I am glad that the chapters thus far have piqued this much interest. Unfortunately (or not, dependin...
Mitch Henderson's plan had worked. He was sitting across the table from his wife's old college boyfriend, Trevor. Trevor had no idea who he was; he thought Mitch was merely a friendly stranger who bought him a beer in the hotel bar "as consolation for cheering for a terrible team like the Yankees." Mitch knew his wife Darcie never intended for him to meet T...
Since I have been with my Master we have explored many limits and why I have them. One activity I have struggled with for a long time is due to past abuse from my ex-husband Dick, anal sex has not been an easy boundary for me to have tested. When Dick and I first began our sexual relationship we each had an open mind about many things, exploration with new...
Hi everyone, To all those lovely people who read my first attempt I just want to say a huge Thank you!!! I finally found an editor and he corrected all the mistakes in the previous submission and fleshed out the story a bit. I am resubmitting a revised version of my first attempt. PLEASE, feel free to comment or give ideas where you would like to see the st...
"Need a hand?" Frustrated by the lack of height that meant she would need either a step stool or the help of the man leaning in through her office door, Melissa let her reaching arms fall to her side with a slap against her upper thighs. "I don't know why they don't make these storage closets with lower shelves," she complained. If it was up to Kendrick,...
The First of the Three Spirits I snapped awake, my eyes wide, staring into the darkness. Something had awakened me - but what? I seemed to remember, as in the fading remnants of a dream, the sound of bells... jingle bells, which might have made sense; it was Christmas Eve, after all... ...were it not for the fact that it was 2 AM on Christmas Eve, and a...