by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 15, 2017
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
The van Sietter Bride Who Brought Happiness in Her Pocket
Part 2 of 3 (Not much sex in this bit)
She was pretty.
The daughter of the el Shostas was a plump curving creature with golden hair dressed simply on her head. She had a sweetly full bosom, a tidy curve into her waist and then an appealing curve out round her hips. She probably had a good fresh...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Captainofthepeace-Lord Arkyll el Maien van Sietter opened his slanted blue eyes and stared dreamily at the pattern of dancing animals on his curtains. Light shone vaguely through the threads of the curtains suggesting it was time he got up.
He knew they were dancing animals although everyone-else said the curtains were so faded that you could no longer see...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Please give feedback if you have a moment. I'm very keen to improve this story. Public comments or Anonymous feedback using the 'Send Feedback' button are both great :). I relish critical comments and am not at all sensitive about having weaknesses in my writing pointed out.
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Anna! Anna!" a quick husky voice was saying in her ear.
"Mm-mm?" she murmu...
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by
NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith
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One of the sentries was running through the camp. Vadya lifted his head from the diagram of the Palair box disposition which he had been drawing on a board. The young Lieutenants seated on the ground in front of him turned to look where he was looking and Basra got out of his...
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NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
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Vadya climbed out of the saddle, looking warily at the people standing at the top of Castle Sietter's steps. All around him, the sunny cobbled courtyard was full of the van H'las retinue dismounting and Sietter servants taking their horses' reins or going to give a hand to H'las servants unloading p...
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NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
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The seabirds cried above, Vadya sniffed the salt tang of the air and felt a stiff breeze in his hair. It was a cloudy day with occasional sudden shafts of sunlight making the choppy waves in the estuary sparkle. There were flags hanging out on Vadya's caravel and the sailors raised a huzza! as his...
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NaokoSmith
on Sep 1, 2017
Novels and Novellas
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Vadya walked Midnight slowly down the hill into the river port of Paviat. He had enjoyed a riotous three day journey with Tashka and Pava doing imitations along the way. Pava had made up a particularly successful one of an amorous old court Lady, pretending to look over a fan at the two of them and...
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NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith
This is a re-edited version of Chapter 1. (I added to the chapter, and also cut it in half and put half after Chapter 2.) Thank you so much for the feedback, which I'm working hard to take on board.
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Lady Arianna el Jien van Sietter opened her round blue eyes and stared dream...
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by
SilverFox300
on Aug 18, 2017
First Time
I had just returned from visiting my real brother for Christmas, in Boeblingen, near Stuttgart. He was in Radio Company, Seventh Army, stationed in the Panzer Kaserne, on a hill above the town. I loved Ray very much - we were as close as brothers can get. Our Christmas together in a foreign land was very special. We had called mom and dad on Christmas Eve, d...
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NaokoSmith
on Sep 14, 2017
Novels and Novellas
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"Come on!" Tashka yelled, leaning back in the saddle to grimace at Pava. Jewel leapt into the gallop down the winding road to the rambling old grey castle set like an untidy bird's nest above Sietter town in the hills. Pava grinned and nudged Star into a canter. His eyes were wary coming down the fa...
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