Thanks for taking the time to read this. Based on some of the feedback from my previous submissions, I have included the wife's perspective here. I am not sure if I succeeded and frankly it went against the grain a little. I hope it is well received and invite any and all constructive criticism. I ignore criticism from anonymous posters unless it's pos...
I knew where the camera shop was in town, I had bought several cameras from them over the years. However, the last couple of cameras I had bought on the Internet to save money but neither of them turned out quite what I wanted. I learned the hard way that if you didn't quite know enough about what you were buying, it was better going to a specialist. "I am...
Nothing ever works out the way you think it will. Somehow life gets in the way, and everything changes. Or at least gets postponed. After our first wife-sharing experience, we didn't actually see Cherise and Tim for several months. Oh, we spoke by phone, of course. Tim and I would reminisce about that hot and steamy night, and talk about what we wanted to...
I've lived in some part of Southern California all my life. They don't kid you when they say "sunny" CA, I mean unless you go deliberately looking for snow, a couple hours drive to Big Bear or one of the mountain resorts. There was maybe one time when I was a kid, late 80's I think, where we got a dusting of snow in our driveways, at recess we tried making...
I was tired. Tired and thirsty. It was twenty past one in the morning and I had put in a long hard day at work, in fact a long hard week at work, and then wearily got in my car for the usual Friday night drive back home. My job is contract based, and at the moment it means that I spent my working week 230 miles from where I live and only go home at weekends....
She Cooks Too by BrettJ © 2012 For my first story of 2012, I decided that I would return to a familiar character that we haven't seen for a while. I recommend reading "There is Baking and There is Cooking" first if you are new to my work. ~~BrettJ Asia Fitzgibbons had many things going for her. She was tall, long-legged, with firm, high breasts and g...
Aisha sat Indian style on top of the steel top desk inside of Paul’s office. “...and that is a piece of cornbread.”, she said pointing to a Tupperware dish off to the side. Aisha had made Paul a traditional African American meal which is commonly termed soul food. Her grandmother had taught her how to fry a perfectly golden piece of catfish, accompanied by...
Alyssa was still an attractive woman at the age of 33. Even after two kids and 12 years of marriage, Alyssa had kept her youthful beauty. Standing 5'3" with long auburn hair and large piercing green eyes. Her pale skin was covered with a small spattering of freckles that she hated but her husband found irresistible. Years of exercise and diet had left her sl...
This story, not just this part, is for Hooked100! An inspiration, to me & I hope to others... (You need to read part 01 to understand Elizabeth's perspective and the reason for her narrative.) * We drove home in silence, George furious. I could see his red face in the dash lights. I smoked incessantly. Filling the ash tray in the console with lipsti...
I suppose, looking back, you wonder how a lot of things happened in your life. Most of them – all of them – seem very innocent. A string of mishaps at school – fourth form, fifth form. Some embarrassing enough that I rub my fingers into my eyes at the memory, groaning softly. But still, even the worst of them are so childish, compared to the night that I sp...