I am hoping to finish this piece at 5000 words. I am close but I want to get some feedback on how to make this better. Please comment with what works for you, what didn't, what I can improve, and what should be destroyed. I eagerly await feedback/comments/contructive criticism. -BenevolentDCC ***** Once I had been a healer beyond repute, sought far and w...
Dear Shoeblossom: My cousin Glen is married to a dominant bitch called Jocelyn. When Glen and his brother Gavin, both free-wheeling, bimbo-chasing poker-playing drunkards met Jocelyn in a club, they had no idea that the icy blonde would tempt the two of them, and Glen's boss Monroe, into becoming her slave harem! Now Glen hasn't been out for a poker night...
Margaret Sanderson, Vice President and director of marketing for PLEEZE ME Products had been reprimanded for her apparent deficiency in developing innovative new merchandize. The CEO, Stephen Miller, indicated he would give the young, ambitious and beautiful MBA one last chance. “Either do it, Margaret, or I will have no choice but to ask for your resigna...
Thanks, Uncle Meat, for editing this one too. * * * * * * * * * * "Are you actually telling me…?" Amy stopped, took a deep breath, continued, "Kelly, are you out of your mind?!" About week after Christmas, on New Year's Eve, Kelly finally told her roommate Amy what had happened on Christmas Eve after she decided she could no longer take the 'what happened...
Chapter 6: Satisfaction FRIDAY EVENING AT THE DORM "Well, it's plain what you two have been doing. You might as well be wearing a sign that says you just had great sex! You act like you're going to mate again right here!" Dianne's observation set the tone for conversation during the remainder of the meal. For the most part I just sat and listened as the wo...
“Watch out for the bat!” I ducked just in time as a flying toy buzzed through the plastic hair on my Frankenstein’s monster mask and crashed into the wall. Immediately, two girls rushed to retrieve it. First to get there was a sensuous Black Cat. With her buxom build and auburn hair flowing down her black velvet back, I guessed that it was Kitty Rourke, the...
Author's note: I first want to thank those that continue to enjoy my stories and vote; it gives me great joy knowing my work pleases you the reader. I also appreciate the many comments, both positive and negative, they continue to feed my desire to write and help me to refine my writing. For my critics I appreciate your honesty and candor; your comments may...
Susan has a panty, bra, and shoe fetish and so doesn't William and Liz too. After weeks of giving William and his wife, Liz, the same sexy, striptease show of her stripping herself naked and parading around her room naked before getting in bed to masturbate herself, the next night, Susan gave them a much different show but one as equally erotic. Instead of...
Xerxes stormed into his quarters, his body shaking in barely leashed fury. He'd half expected what he found today, but having his worst fears confirmed just added to all his problems. How that little shit had gotten his hands on the latest net his company produced, he didn't know. It wasn't even out yet, and only a few select people had been given a beta ver...
"Al, tell me what's wrong," Kiana chided. "I skipped The Harpy for you, come on." "I'm fine, Kiana, leave me alone!" Alaster tried to close the door again, but Kiana shifted to hold it open with her shoulder. "Go away!" "The fact that you're yelling isn't helping your case," she told him. "Tell me what's wrong, or I'm bringing Hatter into this." Alaster...