by
rosamundi
on Sep 16, 2017
Romance
I'm overwhelmed and delighted by your amazing response to chapter four. I was a bit unsure how readers would respond to my psych out at the end, but it seems nobody minded and you found it as fun as I did. Please keep the comments coming, since this is still my first work of fiction. I've had extremely helpful advice from several readers that have improved t...
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by
rosamundi
on Sep 16, 2017
Romance
Thank you to all of you giving me high votes, it really warms my heart and makes me feel proud. If you could take a moment to make even a very brief comment, I would love to hear why you like what you like, or how I could improve the story or correct errors. I live for your comments! Oh, and chapter five is about halfway done I think, I will post it ASAP. *h...
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by
rosamundi
on Sep 16, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Thanks to everyone who reads and rates each chapter of this story! I'm requesting comments, because this is my first attempt at a novel and my second attempt at writing fiction. Both positive and politely phrased criticisms are welcome.
"...Women are no more cowards on whole than men. You fight battles, we bear babes. My lot is as bloody and painful and...
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by
Androgynousother
on Sep 26, 2017
BDSM
My name is Michael - family and friends call me Mike. At that time I considered myself an unremarkable 23 year-old, English WASP with a degree in psychology and a post-graduate certificate in education.
I was working through my last summer before starting teaching in a secondary school near my old home town. I was brought up with the 'protestant work ethic'...
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by
rosamundi
on Sep 16, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Thanks to my readers who comment, I am improving greatly as a writer, hence I have edited this chapter. I've also switched categories to romance. I live for your feedback, so please comment, even briefly, when you rate this to tell me why you gave it the stars you did. Thanks again! - Rosamundi
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On market day a fortnight later, Lord Reynard addressed Lila...
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by
FinalStand
on Aug 24, 2020
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
*Editing magic performed by Shyqash, plus contributions by the regular gang of brigands and neer-do-wells*
*This tale is a bit tongue and cheek as well as kinky, so be warned.*
*Are regrets really worth the trouble?*
{No sex this chapter ~ just character building stuff}
[THINGS AREN'T QUITE THE WAY I THOUGHT THEY'D BE]
It was Monday afternoon and I felt...
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by
rosamundi
on Sep 14, 2017
Novels and Novellas
Thanks to loyal readers so far, and for the kind advice several people have given me. I am changing the title character's name to Lord Reynard for the sake of a Norman, not German, name for my protagonist. Please comment early and often as I add chapters, they really help me emotionally and as a writer!
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Lilac ambled through the gaping stone entry of the...
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by
rosamundi
on Sep 16, 2017
Romance
I realize that this chapter is short, but I need to move past it to develop the story because it's been stalling me. Such are the vicissitudes of reading amateur work on the web, I suppose! I hope you all enjoy the feast of 2 chapters after a famine, sorry my disability has been kicking my ass lately!
Please vote and remember that I have a comment fetish. :...
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by
SamScribble
on May 8, 2018
Mature
It is my first week at Downton Books. I have spent three days working in the stock room, unpacking deliveries, logging new arrivals, and then stocking shelves. But now Christina has promoted me to join Austin at the front counter.
'Mrs da Silva,' Austin mutters. And he nods in the direction of the smartly-dressed woman with silver-streaked hair who has just...
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by
redwolf555
on Mar 11, 2019
Fetish
Chapter Four: "The Rest of the Story"
It was the morning of graduation, a Saturday. Silva was upstairs getting ready for the day. Jessie and Jenny were seated at the dining table.
Jessie says, "I'm so proud of you Mom. You did it! And you're at the up of your class."
Jenny smiled.
Jessie goes on, "I've been thinking about the future."
"Oh, this shou...
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