by
ruwild
on Sep 14, 2017
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
The morning light shone through the three skylights, down onto the bed and Tony thought that it was just about the most beautiful sight he'd ever seen. He tried to remember last night but it was mostly a blur. He had been rushing home to his family through streets clogged with hysterical people as the huge comet glowing in the night sky hurtled toward Earth,...
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by
ruwild4hismind
on Sep 13, 2017
Erotic Couplings
You're relaxed in your poolside chair, head back, the sun warm on your skin.
Over the course of the morning, the number of people around the pool has risen and fallen, but there's been one constant. The Stranger with the blue eyes. You've noticed him looking at you from time to time, and when your eyes meet you can't keep his gaze. But you know he's looking...
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by
skywriter62
on Sep 16, 2017
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Again I would like to thank the amazing RUWILD for the friendship and encouragement. I would have never ventured out this far on my own believe me!
I also appreciate the votes and encouraging comments. Feedback to help me improve is honestly and greatly appreciated. Anyone with experience as an editor who can help me clean up my rather rough and probably r...
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by
skywriter62
on Sep 16, 2017
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
This is actually my first story anywhere online. I have received encouragement from RUWild, one of the best authors online that I have ever read. Hoping that this wonderful person is correct, I am taking the plunge here. As this is my first attempt, I do welcome any constructive criticism. If this story is in any way like another anywhere else please let me...
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by
skywriter62
on Sep 16, 2017
Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Surprisingly, I am back with another part to this series. I can only thank the few readers that have commented and again RUWild for the encouragement to continue. I am very happy that my writing can entertain the people that it has so far. Hopefully, I will improve and I can provide good stories for a larger audience. So please, honest constructive criticism...
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by
studmuffin911
on Jun 4, 2019
BDSM
This is my first story written, constructive feedback would be appreciated please.
A big thank you to Ruwild to doing the edits.
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My name is Matt and I have a story to teach guys who cheat you always get caught.
Matt:25 stocky build about 5 ft 6 short dark brown hair and 7 inches of thick meat.
Kate:23 long dark brown hair, blue eyes and a body tha...
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