Published 2/16/2014@ I understand your concerns as this is one solution of the future As we all dawn the twenty-first century, even more extraneous & Old World crude methods remain in order to correct while incarcerate societies misbehaviors. Crime is getting more & more, higher tech and greater from year to year, As punishment methods have been the same...
This is a tutorial, part one, of creating compelling conversations to wow your readers, and propel your story, and dialogue. Creating realistic dialogue is an important aspect of writing. Good conversation simply does not consist of a listing of He said this, she said that, he growled, she purred, they hissed, etcetera. People do not purr, or hiss, or chir...
A Brief Conversation: As both a writer and an editor, I have found that the most common reason for stories being rejected is due to improper formatting of conversations. If you follow the rules set out here, I can't guarantee that your story will be accepted, but it won't be rejected for conversation errors. I strongly recommend the essay How To Make Charac...
It's 2025 and America has changed a lot during the past five years leading to a more violent and Puritan era. Money hasn't ever mattered more and people are overwhelmed by tv-series, news and so on. Timothy Lafferty, 37 years old, is now the president of California. He's such a powerful man that can have all he wants. He gained his position with good behavio...
Springford School is an old fashioned 3-floor building with many winding turns and unpredictable rooms. Mr Hodgkinson has decided to make you undertake your 2-hour detention in one of the upper tier 3rd Floor classrooms. There is absolutely noone else left in the school building, apart from yourself and Mr Hodgkinson. You feel awkward and nervous as you knoc...
Chapter 21 -- The Danubian Spring "Socrates' Mistresses" returned to the national stage on May 1, once again performing for the Danubian public. Like the year before, the group performed live in Danube City's Central Plaza as part of the May Day Celebrations. Once again the deputies and staff-members of the National Parliament lined up on the rooftop and ba...
Only a few moments passed before my eyes drifted open. I focused on Kayla and I noticed her exquisite beauty. Naturally, a very pretty girl, but once she added touches of makeup, let her hair down and styled it just so, the change was astonishing! I examined the flawless shape to her tiny body, the glow in her skin, and the shine and thickness in her perfect...
Daisy could not believe she was standing here; it was bad enough that she had spent the last ten weeks confined in the Punishment and Retraining Institution for professional women as a result of poor performance at work and her desire to keep her job in the longer term. Somehow though she had managed to maintain her discipline despite the deprivations and hu...
No Controlling Legal Authority Ch. 28: Courtroom Christmas Part 2 Courtship Caleb Style, or Anne Pleads Her Case Caleb allowed her to lead him from his office into the courtroom adjoining his office. The door closed behind them, and she paused while her eyes adjusted to the light. He reached for the light-switch, but she stopped him saying, "Don't, please,...
Chapter 4 -- The Arraignment Committee Spokeswoman Lee-Dolkivna was determined to escort her client downtown as quickly as possible, so Maria Elena was spared the hassle of having to take the older couple's suitcases off the trolley. Kim enlisted a male criminal and ordered him to help out instead. Ordinarily he would have knelt while receiving her command,...