============================ Your readers are precious. Help them My first foray into the How-to category. Some notes on making your stories more 'readable' and therefore, more enjoyable. ============================ Let's face it. The readers here on Literotica have a lot to choose from. If they have any issues with your story, it's easy enough to drop...
What’s so important about choosing the right words? Even though you have a dynamite idea for an erotic story, if you accept mediocre word choices more often than not, then your writing will be as lifeless as Bob Dole’s dick when he’s missed his Viagra dose. Every single word has a denotation – a meaning. When you look up a word in the dictionary, you find...
Perhaps one day someone will convene a panel of scholars and academics that discusses Black sexuality and that addresses the subject of Black erotica. From the rhythmic tales of the sagacious griot, weaving tales of slaves whose love endured the horrors of chattel slavery, to the Harlem Renaissance with its unapologetic look at that mysterious element which...
CHAPTER 4 - AT THE UNIVERSITY Having successfully endured several carefully orchestrated, increasingly intense punishment sessions from her Master after every misstep, she now exists in a more fully obedient and true state of submission to her Master. He has trained his slave very well over these many weeks, and her missteps have almost entirely disappeared...
(Chapter 19) "The Last Time" (circa-1990) Justice Adrian Bradshaw removed his wire-rimmed spectacles from his tweed jacket pocket and after slipping them over his nose he stared at the nine defendants in the dock. All nine had pleaded guilty to theft or the receiving of stolen goods. Of the nine defendants, three men in their mid-twenties had pleaded g...
Chapter 2 -- Kim's first punishment Kim was emotionally drained the following morning. She kept on hoping everything was somehow an awful nightmare and at some point she would wake up. She used the chamber-pot and then sat sadly on her mattress wondering what horrible things would be done to her today. That panel yesterday had mentioned a trial. The cell d...
OF FLESH AND BLOOD PROLOGUE My carefree life had come to a crashing halt. I'd really done it this time, but this time unlike the others there was not a way of getting myself out of it. My mission had been to investigate various attacks on merchant wagons that traveled from The City of Splendors to The City of Sails. The attacks had always come near the sm...
************************************************* Copyright Oggbashan September 2019 The author asserts the moral right to be identified as the author of this work. This is a work of fiction. The events described here are imaginary; the settings and characters are fictitious and are not intended to represent specific places or living persons. The house...
Chapter 10 -- A letter from Criminal # 98945 Kim returned to her normal life the next day. She went to work at the normal time in her normal manner, taking the crowded trolley downtown to the music store wearing nothing but her collar and orange boots. Her co-workers, of course, were curious to see the results of Kim's latest punishment. As was customary,...
I can not imagine a class more boring than senior English. Who cares about people who died hundreds of years ago? Who cares about how to write a sonnet? Who cares about literature? Just boring trivia, nothing I will ever need to know. It takes all my effort to stay awake in that class. But you had to admit, Ms. Gabriel made it all worth it. She is my teacher...