Thanks so much for all of the feedback so far. I really appreciate all of your votes as well. Now that I am writing a few stories here I understand better how important it is to vote. I know I released the first story a bit too soon and it was a bit too rough in places. But I was nervous that if I didn't post it when I did . . . it would never get uploaded...
Writer's Notes: New story here. And now its been reedited so it should have less mistakes and be easier to read. I just want to say a couple things first. I'm not sure if someone like Brittany would really say some of the phrases I have her use but they seem to fit. Also when you get to Jane describing how she looked at Brittany, you will understand when yo...
********* This is all fiction. I mention a few well known places and persons - but it's still all fiction. Not much sex in this continuation of "Change." ********* It has been three years since I came home from Afghanistan the second time. And a lot has changed in my life since I went to Afghanistan the first time. And I have changed a lot as well, in som...
Part 1 I awoke with a jerk from a bad dream, the details of which fled with the opening of my eyes. There was a warm body in the bed beside me. It belonged to a doll named Isabella Wyona, as did the bed, the room, and the apartment. She was Caribbean, from a place called Cat Island. A fan dancer down at the Diamond Club and a pretty good one. Her deep brow...
I awoke to the familiar sounds of a hospital. The constant "beep beep" of a heart monitor, the smells of disinfectant, the soft noises. I tried to open my eyes but nothing happened. I tried to move and found I couldn't. I tried to open my mouth to call out and found I couldn't move. It was as if I was paralyzed. I lay there and just listened. Soon I was ab...
PREFACE Please note: There will be no voting—this is for information only; as well, comments are welcome, as are PMs and email with any questions about this essay. However, any comment which is simply "testimony" otherwise known as witnessing by churchy people, argumentative, or preachy, will be deleted immediately. This is not a forum for debating—most of...
This is the fourth part in a continuing series that started with "Show and Tell Dinner", "Job Interview with a Twist", and "Shoppin at the Mall". If you like this story, please read the others, and feedback is always welcome. * * * She cursed the morning weather under her breath as she maneuvered around other drivers in the torrential down pour. She had wo...
Clueless, absolutely clueless, I was. Didn't even have an inkling and I would have continued to have lived in ignorance if it hadn't been for that blasted leaking factory roof. I loved that sodding woman, my wife Pat, and I would have given my life for her in a heartbeat if I had to. And to have our life together ended in such a cliché, well the heartbreak...
The setting is a small city in New Zealand. The hero with the odd name of Dio falls into an usual occupation that connects him to an assortment of offbeat characters. Dio enjoys a life richer in many ways than most people around him. He and twenty year old Carra break-down the hostility of Carra's parents over the 12-year age difference between her and Dio a...
They say that when you work with something every day you become desensitized to it. Justin could definitely attest to that. Like when you worked for a pizza shop and so would soon tire of pizza and no longer want to eat it, even at another restaurant. For Justin, however, it was porn. When Justin had first started five years ago, it had been hard to concent...