I know how very few people comment, much less provide criticism on stories online. Giving criticism, however, easy for the reader and helpful to the author. This guide isn't just for stories, I've found it useful in almost anything I've ever read, watched or played. In fact, I've even used it on food. That's just how versatile criticism can be. However, for...
Bev and I had been married almost fifteen years before the desire to see her with another man hit me. It happened at a family wedding reception where the drinks were flowing freely. It was half way through the evening, every one had swallowed enough to be mellow and Bev was on the dance floor with some guy from the bride's side of the family. I could tell fr...
My trough was filled to the brim with sloppy food. My vagina grew slick from the thought of the sloppy mess it was going to cause, and excitement filled up within me. "Come on, Adele," my owner called, patting his thigh. I squealed, and although hard, I got on my knees and hands and crawled over to the trough. The other pigs ate beside me. I gave an an...
The events in the following story are all true, although at times they may seem to be a bit cliché. It wasn't until years later that these types of stories turned me on. When this initially went down, I was disgusted and very angry. I occasionally think back on the events and now have finally decided to try and write a few things down. I've changed enough of...
I had been begging my with to fuck another man and bring her cum filled pussy home to me for about two years. She thought I was crazy and though she'd tease me that someday she may not be able to resist if I kept it up, she never did anything except tease me during sex. Last week that all changed. We were making love last Sunday evening when I again asked...
I scope out your sexy, trashy outfit as I drive my car up to the sidewalk where you stand. I love your fuckme boots and your torn, seamed stockings. Very street-corner-whore-ish! I decide to pick you up this time around! We speak only to negotiate a price of $100 but I brow beat you down to $50. I make you go down on me in the car while I drive to a filthy b...
I don't know how many men I screwed last night because I drank a little too much and got pretty stoned. It must have been several because I smell like a New York whore and my legs, thighs and pussy are tender and sticky with cum. I guess I passed out on the bed in the guest bedroom after all of the fucking because I just woke up and that's where I am right n...
My wife is a beautiful woman, the kind guys fawn over. She is 5'4" weighs 115 lbs. Has a very pretty face and long brown hair. Pert 34C breasts and nice round hips that show off her perfecly shaped ass. I thought it best to let you know ahead of time just exactly what is makes me happy. Over the last couple of years, we've been married for 15, I've been rea...
Johnny finished the gig at about twelve-thirty but he hung around while Dan and the crew broke down the stage and stored the equipment. Dan had seen Dotie, the waitress Johnny was hitting on when they first arrived, actually talked a bit with her as Johnny finished up his sound checks and rehearsed a bit. Dan had thoughts of perhaps connecting with Dotie unt...
I awoke to find you had already gotten up, though the bed still carried the your scent. I got up and went into the kitchen to find you at the counter spreading cream cheese on a couple of bagels. You were wearing only panties, and I enjoyed watching the sway of your long hair and slightly hanging tits as you worked. "Hi, honey," you greet me. I kiss you on...