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Shygirlwhore is my editor. Everyone in this story is over eighteen and Ruby is the narrator. *** Honeymoon blues It came time that we had to leave our little Oasis and newfound friend behind. We said our goodbyes and exchanged mobile numbers. We took off in our luxurious houseboat and went to explore some of the smaller hidden islands that the owner of t...
My thanks to Angel Love for editing and assisting me with my endeavour. * After almost 20 years of being married to a French lady, during which time we have both had several other lovers, I feel that I must put down for all to see why I think that they are the epitome of womanhood. Here are my personal thoughts in no particular sequence, but grouped by way...
There was no mistaking Becky's unwillingness to have sex at night. Her back was turned and her legs were clamped firmly around her pillow, which guarded her pussy from any assault by my fingers or cock. It was the greatest frustration I could imagine. Becky was the most sexually ravishing person I had ever known. She was slim and trim and clean and beautifu...
I was nervous. I was horny, but sober. But I admit I was really nervous. I had wanted to have a cock up my ass just to try it, but as I got my nerve up, the first couple of encounters were so large that I stayed with giving them a long blow job and bringing them off in my throat. I liked it and they seemed satisfied. But now I had been on travel and away f...
Bibi lies in bed alone. She decided to go to bed as her fiancé Danny once again had fallen asleep on the couch after too many beers. It had become the all too familiar way for Bibi to spend her Friday nights in recent weeks... or months, if she had to be completely honest. She knew Danny had passed out once again, after too many beers, and he wouldn't join h...
Part 1 of this story is mostly true (The conversation on the observation deck is made up). It took place several years ago while I was on vacation in Jasper, Alberta. The rest of the story is based on a dream I had that night. No sex takes place in part 1, only some flirtation and attraction. This isn't a sex story. It is a story of mutual physical and emo...
Please let me know what you think of this tale, feedback is what pushed me to finish it. Did it make you rock hard? Soaking wet? Or did it make you yawn, or angry? Let me know, but I hope you enjoy it as much as I did... Our small kitchen was a bustle of activity, my own rushed, anxious movements contrasting with Hanna's relaxed calm. She sat down at the s...
Note: This story contains submissive, but consensual, piercing and serious body modification. If this isn't your scene, please don't continue reading. * "Are you sure?" Tom asked. Rachel stood a moment twirling her hair, and emphatically answered, "Yes!" "I'm sorry—I'm not really sure I understood you! Could you please repeat it?" he requested, somewhat...
All characters are 18years of age or above. * Bill grew up in the 1950s and 60s- one of millions of boys whose sex education was slow and involved more effort than required now. Looser societal standards and technology such as cable TV and the Internet have accelerated the maturation process. Before the age of freely available nudity on the Internet and...