Love the feedback folks. It is amazing to hear so many different thoughts on chapter 1 and what you think of Chip. BTW- I see Paul Rudd as Matty in my head. I'll try to flesh out the rest of the cast as we go! We pickup the story outside of Matty's house on Saturday night. Chip has just found out 24 hours ago that his wife Joan has been plotting for a ye...
I was born in 1967 to a single woman who had engaged in an affair with a married man. She came from a well to do family so could not possibly keep me. At least she had the decency to go through the pregnancy before she put me up for adoption. I was placed in a Children's Home for a few months before luckily I was picked up by a couple who wanted a son to kee...
I sit on the bus like a frighten animal. Outside the cold air licks the windows and condenses my breath into fog against them. The butterflies in my stomach are fluttering so fast that they must be trying to kill one another. Surely I'm stupid, nothing about my plan bears any intelligence, yet I can't get myself to pull the cord and hop off the bus to go hom...
Responses to the first three chapters have been good and helpful but I am a comments whore and always on the lookout for more! Anything you want to say whether you love it or hate it, please don't hesitate More Australianisms Mobile = cell phone. Cricket Test = an international match played over five days. Wharfie = longshoreman or docker. Harry star...
Mina now takes Lukas to the kitchen, to help her make coffee and tea, and soon enough Adison, Vincent and Melissa arrive with their visitors. Father Nicholas looks much the same as yesterday, but tired, no doubt his night was even longer than theirs. Two burly men follow him on his heels, Hercules, now dressed in trousers and a work-shirt, and shoes, and t...
England 1812 Martin toyed with the ring on his finger. Laresa had told him the rules. He knew he couldn't make Shastae fall in love with him, but he knew he didn't stand a chance of making her his if Andrew was always in the way. He licked his lips before taking a deep breath to call forth his secret weapon. A small mist of smoke filled the air around him...
I don't know why I do it. Somewhere deep inside me I know that it's wrong in some way, but I still go there. It's also not as if I couldn't have any boy I wanted. I'm not blind, and I can see the effect I have on them. There's always someone new asking me out and I always say "no". It's been this way since I was sixteen. Now that I'm in my third year of col...
Copyright © 2015 Naoko Smith Please leave comments for me. Thank you! (Diolch.) One of the sentries was running through the camp. Vadya lifted his head from the diagram of the Palair box disposition which he had been drawing on a board. The young Lieutenants seated on the ground in front of him turned to look where he was looking and Basra got out of his...
Let me start by mentioning that the story below is true, and I place blame on this site. Like many men, I have spent years reading the various stories on Literotica. Over the years I became addicted. I would also like to mention that I am in no way a writer, so I hope that I am able to present the story as well as many of the writers I have enjoyed over the...
I surprise you, and tell you we're going to Amsterdam for the night. You're delighted, and ask how you should dress. I look into your eyes and tell you: "You already know." You're ready soon, and we step outside. There's a limousine waiting; the driver opens the door and you get in first. As we're driving, I can't help but look at you: You're vibrant, stunn...