*This is my first story, hope you enjoy* * * * * * It was Friday night. He'd come over after school, to just chill, hang out. They'd been friends for about 3 years and they both had a love for Art House films. They would spend hours together, watching movies, talking about movies. Allie had told him that her parents had gone away for the weekend so he said...
For those who wanted some more here goes. If the feedback is good I will post chapter three. Hope you enjoy. * "I want to spank..." She paused for a moment then started again, " I want to spank you." My face must have looked like a picture cause there she lay in my bath giggling like a school girl. "What brought that on?" "Having just been spanked till...
Brenda came into my office yesterday morning the way she did every morning. She sashayed her hips through the door as she brought me a cup of coffee in one hand and the day's mail in the other. "Good morning, Boss." I liked it when she called me Boss. I thought it was cute. "Good morning, Brenda." She set the coffee down on my credenza, and put the mail d...
Stacy carefully packed her 'overnight' bag, which in truth was really more like a vacation sized bag; she felt it was better to be prepared than to get caught with the wrong outfit. After a moment of deep thought, she added a fourth pair of shoes and decided she was covered. Stacy was really excited about this trip for several reasons. Chief among them was...
Please send your comments via my profile. * Madeline went through the mental checklist in her head. "Okay, called Greg, door's locked, stove's off, Jacob's sleeping, toys are put away...Crap! What am I missing," she asked herself. She walked around the darkened condo trying to remember what she had forgotten to do. Her son Jacob was an early riser and woul...
Again, I would like to thank Kriskrossedup for helping me to edit this chapter. Indulge in my fantasy and enjoy. Constructive comments are very welcome. ~ At 6 A.M., a hand shook my arm and it startled me awake. I felt dazed and foggy and confused when the girl who woke me up introduced herself as Sarah. I mumbled a 'hello' and turned over. "I know you...
6 THE BLIGHTED PALACE When Greg woke up his first thought was that he'd never felt so dead. Then he remembered getting stabbed in the gut with a spear, and realized that he was dead. Nonetheless, he could still breathe and look around. Maybe being dead wasn't so bad after all. On the other hand, he was in a cell of pitch-black stone, the walls of which dri...
I am trying to write in a little different style in this story. Please give me your criticisms so that I can try to become a better writer. If all you have is racist comments, don't bother. After cheerleader practice late that afternoon, Angela realized that she had left her driver's license in the girl's locker room. She walked the deserted hallways hummi...
Dave was sitting out on his front porch enjoying the weather. It was Sunday evening and he just got done taking his daughter back to her mother's. He was sitting on the steps smoking a cigar around 8pm. A car pulled in next door and Dave recognized it was, Ashley, his neighbor. She moved in 3 months ago with Kindra, L. C., Andy, and Steve. Ashley was the yo...
Holy crap. Please forgive me oh so much. So things came up, I was hospitalized for a short time. A lot has been going on. Then I hit a huge chunk of writers block and couldn't blow it apart until long after I forgot about it. And that is what I ask forgiveness for. I refuse to allow this story to just drop off the map like so many that I have seen. If you li...